高考英语作文评分标准
河南省汝州市一般来说，写作题的高考评分标准包含评分原则、内容要点、给分范围及要求、说明和参考范文五个部分。其中内容要点以及词数、标点、书写等方面的原则比较容易理解、操控和落实。但“评分时，应该注意的主要内容为……应用词汇和语法结构的数量……上下文的连贯性和语言的得体性”等评分原则，“应用了较多的语法结构和词汇;语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致，具备较强的语言运用能力;有效地使用了语句间的连接成份，使全文结构紧凑”等给分要求、以及“对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分”等说明，相对比较抽象，不易捉摸。 一、 如何理解“应用了较多的词汇”
这里所说的“词汇”，可以从高级词汇的使用、同义词的使用、短语的使用等方面去理解：
(一) 高级词汇的使用
评分标准第五档次的要求中提到，“词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致”。这里所说的“高级词汇”，指的是大纲中没有列入或没有识记要求，但在实际
运用中却出现比较频繁的词汇，比如frustration, awkward, awfully, concern等词，都可以算作是“高级词汇”。考生若能够适当地运用一些高级词汇，定会给评卷老师留下深刻的印象。
1. I can’t find any way to solve the problem.
改进：I can’t find any solution to the problem.
2. The pet dog is so lovely that almost everybody likes her.
改进：The pet dog is so cute that almost everybody likes her.
3. The question is really difficult to understand.
改进：The question is really confusing.
4. He had to face all the possible difficulties.
改进：He had to cope with all the possible difficulties.
(二) 同义词的使用
英语中有些词的使用频率非常高，比如interesting, clever等，在表达时大家都很喜欢用，这样很容易令文章入千人一面的窘境中。但如果我们能够使用它们相应的同义词，就可以做到与众不同，给评卷者带来清新的感觉。例如： 1. It will be very interesting.
小松930e改进：It will be a lot of fun.
2. He was so clever that he could count all the way up to 100 at one year old.
改进：He was so smart that he could count all the way up to 100 at one year old.
3. Last summer I visited New Jersey with my parents.
改进：Last summer I toured New Jersey with my parents.
(三) 适当利用短语取代单词
总体而言，使用短语的难度比单词要大一些，因此适当运用短语更能显出作者的功力。例如：
1. Suddenly I had a good idea.
改进：Suddenly I came up with a good idea.
2. Take a moment to see what is happening around you.
铜瓦改进：Take a moment to see what is going on around you.
3. Everyone should do his or her best.
改进：Everyone is supposed to do his or her best.
二、 如何理解“应用了较多的语法结构”
固定句式(如感叹句、复合结构、强调句型等)、定语从句、现在分词短语等都属于较复杂的语法结构。这些结构的正确使用，可以使文章的语言充满层次感，从而较好地反映写作者的语言运用能力。
(一) 使用固定句式
1. She was robbed of her purse but she had no time to call for help.
网络资本改进：使用before one can do sth.结构：She was robbed of her purse before she could call for help.
2. The environment will never improve until everybody takes care of it.
改进：使用倒装结构：Not until everybody takes care of it will the environment improve.
(二) 使用现在分词结构
现在分词结构可以表达伴随、原因等状语，因此几乎在任何文章中都可以用得上。现在分词短语可以使句子的表达更加简洁、生动，而且也使前后两个动作的衔接更加紧密。例如：
1. Nowadays, we can easily travel from one place to another and this bridges the gap among different races or cultures.
改进：Nowadays, we can easily travel from one place to another, thus bridging the gap among different race or cultures.
2. People worked together on the assembly line.
改进：People worked together on the assembly line, moving quickly and efficiently.
(三) 使用定语从句
定语从句的使用，不仅能使上下文更加流畅，也同时能充分展示写作者运用较复杂的语法结构的能力。例如：
1. My favorite living writer is Ruddy Doyle. I think he is a genius.
改进：My favorite living writer is Ruddy Doyle, who I think is a genius.
2. My aunt bought me a book. The title of the book is All about USA.
改进：My aunt bought me a book, whose title is All about the USA.
三、 如何理解“上下文的连贯性”
评分标准指出，书面表达应该注意“上下文的连贯性”，并能“有效地使用语句间的连接成份，使全文结构紧凑”。这里说的连贯性，就是指通过连接词(包括并列连词，从属连词和连接性副词)、非谓语动词短语等语法成分，使两个或多个意义相互关联的事情或观点在同一个句子内得以表达，从而使整个段落或篇章浑然一体，连贯流畅。
(一) 连接性副词
连接性副词也被称为过渡词。它们的位置一般以句首居多。连接性副词承上启下，能够令读者对后续的句子产生心理上的期待和准备，因此整个篇章会因它们而紧凑连贯。常见的连接性副词有：also, furtherm
ore, in addition, additionally, hopefully, meanwhile, however, instead, in other words, in brief, in a word, in my opinion, on the whole等等。例如：
电动升降机构1. We have many things to do. We believe we can finish before the day is over.
使用连接性副词：We have quite a lot to do. Hopefully, we will be able to finish before the day is over.
2. The boy comes from a poor family. The boy does very well in his studies. The boy plans to work his way through college.
使用连接性副词：Even though he comes from a poor family, the boy does very well in his studies; furthermore, he plans to work his way through college.
(二) 使用从属连词
常见的从属连词有after, as, when, while, as long as, as soon as等。例如：
1. You work hard and never give up. You will succeed in your studies.
张伟宏近况使用从属连词：So long as you work hard, you will succeed in your studies.
2. The teacher came in. the students were quiet.
使用从属连词：The students were quiet as soon as the teacher came in.
四、 如何理解“语言的得体性”
评分标准要求考生应注意“语言得体性”，就是要求在表达时根据说话的对象、时间、地点、场合等因素来选择使用恰当的英语语言。
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