第4章简明英语的基本原则
【答案】innovations
2.arduous task
【答案】task/demanding task
【解析】如果修饰词和中心词词义重复，可直接删除不必要的修饰词，但若删除该词会损害原文的意思时，应考虑寻其他的词进行替换。 3.vigorous development
【答案】development/intensive development
4.further efforts
【答案】efforts/renewed efforts
【答案】measures/determined measures
手机移动电池6.However,these troops,which were what remained after severe tempering,were the valuable cream of the Communist Party of China and the Red Army.
【答案】However,these troops,which were what remained after severe tempering, were the cream of the Communist Party and of the Red Army.
【解析】修饰词cream中含有“the best or most valuable”的意思，因此句中的valuable 多余，可删除。同时of China一意已经隐含在句中，无需译出。
7.Some people are worried whether China will abide by the agreement consistently.
【答案】Some people are worried whether China will abide by the agreement.【解析】to abide by意为“remain faithful to”，其中含有“一直，持续”之意，因此consistently多余。
8.The current great peril facing the whole country and the entire nation was brought on by the erroneous policy pursued by the KMT,which must be thoroughly revised.
【答案】The great peril facing the entire nation was brought on by the erroneous policy pursued by the KMT,a policy that must be reversed.
【解析】句中的现在分词facing表明这些问题是正要面对的，current一词在此处多余。entire和the whole country意思重复，删除其一。thoroughly revised可用强势动词reverse进行替换。 9.The editorial calls on the Chinese people to fully implement the CPC’s basic line, deepen reform and further opening to the outside,so as to further push forward
the political,economic,and social development of the country in a steady way.【答案】The editorial calls on the Chinese people to implement the basic line of the CPC,deepen the reform,and promote t
he opening to the outside,so as to steadily push forward the political,economic,and social development of the country.
【解析】fully一词在句中没有必要，因为通常情况下，人们认为政策应全面落实。若要表达汉语中特定的某种涵义，可用“in all its respects”或“in every respect”。至于further，它是和initial相对的，除了首次推进initial push之外，所有的推进都蕴含着“进一步”的意思，无需增添further一词。
邵力子10.We shall continue to effectively prevent and treat plant diseases and insect pests and spread the use of improved strains and advanced suitable techniques.【答案】We shall continue to prevent and treat plant diseases and insect pests and to spread the use of improved strains and advanced techniques.
【解析】没有“effectively有效地”预防疾病，相当于疾病没有得到预防。通常情况下，我们认为所采取的措施是适合的、恰当的，本句中的suitable多余。但是如果是为了表达“因地制宜”之意，应使用“suited to local conditions”。
11.First,.seize the favorable opportunity and actively create conditions to seek a faster and better development speed.
【答案】First,seize the opportunity to create conditions for faster and better development.
【解析】opportunity的本意为“a favorable or advantageous circumstance or
combination of circumstances.”，已经包含了“favorable”的涵义，因此句中的favorable 可删除。而副词actively的涵义在create一词中已有所体现。此外，原句中better修饰development speed，很容易让人理解为是“更快的”发展速度，这样就与前面的faster 词义重复。而这里想要表达的是“更快、更好的发展”，因此删除speed。
12.Looking back to the war years,I should say that our Second Field Army accomplished its tasks fairly well at every stage of the war.
【答案】本句无需修改。
一周立波秀2011
【解析】通常情况下，“fairly”“quite”“rather”一类的词表达的是不必要的含糊。本句是同志在提到和一起指挥的大别山战役时所说的，fairly表明说法者刻意地淡化陈述，若删除，这种淡化的效果会消失。 Ⅱ.信息流动通畅
1.Its decision on allocation of ESF assistance will be taken subsequent to receipt of all project applications at the Committee’s meeting.
【答案】When all applicants have submitted their project applications,the Committee will meet to decide how much ESF aid it will grant to each one.
【解析】按照动作发生的先后顺序叙述施动者和动作。
2.Complete institutional reform is advocated by the report in most cases.
【答案】What the report advocates,in most cases,is complete institutional reform.【解析】将旧的已知的信息放在句子前面，将新的、复杂的、重要的信息放在句子后面，从
而确保句子结尾。
3.For EU enlargement several alternative scenarios could be considered.
【答案】There are several scenarios that we could consider for EU enlargement.
4.The accession of new Member States in several stages now seems likely.
【答案】It now seems likely that new Member States will join in several stages.
5.It is not uncommon for applications to be rejected,so do not complain unless you are sure you have not completed yours incorrectly.
【答案】It is quite common for applications to be rejected,so complain only if you are sure you have completed yours correctly.
Ⅲ.使用强势动词，避免把动词变为名词
< make an investigation of
【答案】to investigate
< make a careful study of
【答案】to study carefully
信令风暴< make a decision to
球磨
【答案】to decide to
< make a proposal that
【答案】to propose that
< make efforts to
【答案】to try(or:attempt)to
< make an analysis of
【答案】to analyze
< have a dislike for
【答案】to dislike
< have trust in
【答案】to trust
< have an influence on追风伞
【答案】to influence
< have adequate knowledge of 【答案】to know enough about
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