作文 09 河南卷 三年中考英语满分作文解析

作文09  河南卷
2021年
真题在线
水滴石穿,绳锯木断。坚持做好一件事情,成就更好的自己。请以“One thing I keep doing every day”为题,根据以下要点和要求,用英语写一篇发言稿,参加学校的英语主题演讲活动。
1. 要点:
1)你每天在坚持做什么;
2)你坚持这么做的理由;
3)它会给你带来怎样的影响或改变。
2.要求:
1)文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名;
2)词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
One thing I keep doing every day
Good morning, everyone!
I am very happy to be here to make a speech today. The topic of my speech is one thing I keep doing every day.
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That’s all. Thank you!
考题解析
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇演讲稿。要求以“One thing I keep doing every day”为题,根据提
示内容进行写作注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第一人称来介绍,时态综合使用一般现在时和一般过去时。作文可分为三段,第一段引出话题;第二段介绍自己坚持做的事、这么做的理由以及给自己带来的影响和改变;第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。
满分范文
One thing I keep doing every day
Good morning, everyone!
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I am very happy to be here to make a speech today. The topic of my speech is one thing I keep doing every day.
I love running and I have kept running for three years. When I was in Grade 7, I was not good at sports and running was always my weakness. I often failed in my running test. In order to catch up with my classmates, I began to practice running every day after school.
Sometimes, I was so tired that I really wanted to give up. But I kept telling myself that I could make it. No matter what kind of difficulty I faced, I tried my best to keep running. Now I do much better in running. I’m very proud of myself and I’m ready for any challenge in the future.
That’s all. Thank you!
2020年
真题在线
爱思考的人善于提出问题,而提出问题有助于解决我们生活或学习中的困惑。请以”A question I asked”为题,并根据要点和要求,用英语写一篇短文。
1、要点:
1)你提出的问题是什么;达尔富尔问题
2)你为什么会提出这个问题;
3)你提出的问题有什么结果。
2、要求:
电影 深喉1)文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名;
2)词数100左右。
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轴瓦考题解析
【详解】
1.题干解读:该题目是话题类书面表达,短文内容要包含题目中的三个要点。
2.例文点评:例文采用三段式结构,第一段讲述自己遇到的学习问题;第二段讲述向老师求助以后,老师给出学习建议;第三段讲述采纳了老师的建议以后自己的收获。整篇文章
内容完整,结构清晰条理;人称主要是第一人称,时态主要是一般过去时。
3.高分亮点:
短语:begin to do sth.;ask sb. sth.;give up;try to do sth.;to one’s surprise;not…any more。
句型:Even though I could remember some, they went out of my mind soon. even though引导的让步状语从句;One day I asked my teacher a question before I would give up. before引导的时间状语从句。
满分范文
A question I asked
When I began to learn English, remembering words was a big headache to me. Even though I could remember some, they went out of my mind soon. I was so hopeless.
One day I asked my teacher a question before I would give up, “Why do I have to remem
ber words?” The teacher said, “Words are not for remembering but for talking and writing. Keep using them and you will remember them.”
I took her advice and tried to use words in my talking and writing. To my surprise, learning words by heart didn’t seem to be a problem any more.
2019年
真题在线
假如你有机会和任何一个名人共进午餐。请根据以下要点和要求用英语写一篇短文。
1.要点:
1)这个名人是谁;
2)你为什么想和他或她共进午餐;
3)你想和他或她谈论什么。
2.要求:
1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
2)词数80左右。
考题解析
【详解】
这是一篇材料作文,根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下你想和哪位名人共进午餐。主要从1)这个名人是谁;2)你为什么想和他或她共进午餐;3)你想和他或她谈论什么。这三个方面去介绍。注意时态应为一般现在时或一般将来时。人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息,并适当发挥。写作时,避免使用汉语式的英语,尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确,表达要符合英语习惯,注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系,表达具有条理性。
【高分句型一】
Mr. Ren is considered as a great man who always has everything mapped out ahead. 任先生被认为是一个伟大的人,他总是把一切都安排在前面。
句子who always has everything mapped out ahead.是由who引导的定语从句。
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【高分句型二】
If time permits, I’ll ask for his advice for us teenagers today. 如果时间允许的话,我今天就为我们青少年征求他的意见。
句子If time permits, 是由if 引导的条件状语从句。

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