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When I was 13, I climbed my first mountaina 3,900foot peak (山峰) near where I

live in Surrey, British Columbia. I was overweight at the time and out of breath when

I reached the top. But I loved to challenge something bigger than myself, Soon I'd

climbed nearly 100peaks. My parents were happy I'd finally found a hobby.

I often go climbing with my friend Mel Olsen, whom I'd met on the Internet,

Two years ago, on 30 December when I was 16, she and I drove to Oregon to climb

11,240foot Mount Hood.

It's safer to start winter climbs at night when there's less danger of the sun

melting the snow pack. That day, we started at 3 am, following the path alongside the

ski runs. The temperature was about 10 C. Along the way, we met two other climbers,

and the four of us continued together.

After about five hours, we reached Devil's Kitchen,a plateau (高原) at about

10,000feet, just before the final push to the top. By this point, the wind conditions

were skin felt as though it were burning. The other climbers decided to

turn back, but Mel and I went ahead, We checked our equipment and were prepared

for the way we followed grew narrower and steeper (更陡的). At around 9

am, we reached an ice step. It was about three or four feet tall, I volunteered to go first.

I placed my left foot on the ice step. It felt good, Confidently, I thought I was safe, I

put my full weight on ly, I heard a crack (爆烈声),and a whole piece of ice

broke off the step, right under my foot.

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In a while, I started to fall.

I'd been lying on the ice for four hours by the time the rescuers reached me.

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In a while, I started to fall. My left foot had lost its support, and I tumbled

backwards. Mel grabbed my jacket and managed to slow me down, but I still

fell about 50 feet down the mountain. I was lucky to be alive, but I was badly

injured. My left leg was broken in multiple places, and I had a deep gash on my

forehead. Mel called for help on her satellite phone, and the rescue team arrived

in a helicopter.

I'd been lying on the ice for four hours by the time the rescuers reached me. I

was freezing cold, but I was grateful to see them. They carefully put me on a

stretcher and loaded me into the helicopter. I was taken to a hospital in Portland,

where I was treated for my injuries. Despite the accident, I still love climbing.

It's a challenge that pushes me to be my best. I've learned a lot from my

experiences, and I'm determined to continue climbing, but I'm also more careful

now. I always make sure to check the conditions and take the necessary

precautions before heading out on a climb.

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In a while, I started to fall. My heart pounded in my chest as I reached for the

ice axe, but my fingers couldn't grip it. I couldn't feel anything below my waist,

but I knew I was in deep trouble. I looked up at Mel and saw the fear in her eyes.

She was holding onto the ice axe with all her might, but it was no use. The ice

step was giving way beneath us.

I'd been lying on the ice for four hours by the time the rescuers reached me. My

whole body was numb, and I could barely move. I looked up at Mel and saw the

relief in her eyes. She had managed to cling to the ice axe, but she was

exhausted and covered in bruises. The rescuers quickly secured us both with

ropes and carefully lifted us off the mountain.

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In a while, I started to fall. My left leg was still caught in the ice, and I was

hanging upside down. I was confused and scared, but I remembered my training.

I stayed calm, and I used my ice ax and crampons to slow my fall. I stopped

about 20 feet below the ice step.

I'd been lying on the ice for four hours by the time the rescuers reached me. My

body was numb from the cold, and I couldn't feel my left leg. The rescuers put

me on a stretcher and carried me down the mountain. I was grateful for their

help. Despite the accident, I still love climbing. It's a great way to challenge

myself and experience the beauty of nature. I've learned a lot from my

experiences, and I'm grateful for the support of my friends and family. I'll

continue to climb, but I'll always be careful and follow safety guidelines.

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In a while, I started to fall. Fortunately, I was able to grab onto a rock with my

right hand and hold on for dear life. I was suspended in midair, hanging on to

the rock for dear life. Mel quickly realized what had happened and rushed over

to help me. She carefully placed her ax in the ice below me and used it to help

me back onto the trail.

I'd been lying on the ice for four hours by the time the rescuers reached me. I

was cold and scared, but I knew that Mel and I had made the right decision to

turn back. We were able to make it down the mountain safely, thanks to the

support and guidance of the rescue team. Despite the challenges we faced, I still

have a deep love for climbing and plan to continue exploring the great outdoors.

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In a while, I started to fall. I could hear Mel calling my name as I rolled down the

mountain. I stuck out my arms and legs, grabbing at anything I could touch. After a

few seconds, I came to a stop just above the Devil's Kitchen. I'd fallen 600 feet, My

clothes were broken and my face was bloodied from cuts. As Mel made her way down,

I called for help, and other climbers came to assist me, Mel stayed by my side while I

tried not to cry from the pain.

I'd been lying on the ice for four hours by the time the rescuers reached me. They tied

me into a sled and pulled me down the mountain. I can stand a pretty high pain, but I

cried with each bounce. At the bottom of Mount Hood, I was loaded into an

ambulance and taken to a hospital, where I stayed for four years. The doctor told me it

would be a year before I could climb again, but I was back on the trails within six

months.