英语作文必备MyViewOnOpportunity

1. Composition

2. My View On Opportunity

3. Section C Writing

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition

of no less than 120 words on the topic

“My View on Opportunity” . Your composition

should be based on the following outline (given in Chinese)

有人认为机会是极少的， 另一些人则认为人人都会有某种机会， 你的看法如何？ 写出你的观点，说明你的理由并举例。 在你的文章结尾处不要忘记写出你的结论。

1. Criteria

A. Simple Sentences

B. Correct Logical Order

C. No Serious Grammatical Mistakes

Marks

1. Serious Grammatical Mistakes

2. Third Personal Singular；

3. Singular / Plural；

4. Spelling；

5. Capital letter；

6. Punctuation；

7. My view…?

8. Others’ opinion；

9. Examples…

10. Non-sentences/Ch-English

11. Opportunity, a word that is so important;

12. Opportunity alway waiting for the one always be ready for it;

13. Who want to success should do…;

14. Anyone wants opportunities, but we seem often hear that;

15. There are people consider;

16. Have many opportunities in our life;

17. Word form

18. Opportunity is little;

19. Every one have;

20. Someone/somebody think…the other;

21. one people/a people/The people who;

22. success; succeed; successful;

23. I am in favor of that life is/hold the view about that opportunity;/Maybe

you trust on that it is important/As people usually talk out that when there

is a will

24. Repetition/Arbitrary

25. In the world …; in the 21-century;

26. Someone think ... The others think … I prefer the latter, that is …;

27. The opportunities is little; If you… the opportunity is many;

28. If you work hard, and you will catch it. If you not, and you won’t;

29. There are two kinds of people. One think that the opportunity is little, the

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other think that the opportunity belongs to everyone;

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30. Red ink; Title;

31. Coherence

32. We can make a speech to show yourself…

33. To we the students of university;

34. As a student, we…；

35. To do… doing…

36. How to write this essay

Structure of the essay

1. Some (people) say that….because….

2. Some (people) think that….because….

3. Others (other people) believe that…because….

4. My point of view is….because…..

Take … as an example…..

5. Conclusion

I…

1. Story

很多人在机遇降临时.感觉不到机遇的存在,更不能说及时抓住机遇.这或许就是为什么大多数人一辈子庸庸碌碌终一事无成的缘故吧.甚或有些人在突然而至的多个机遇面前，失去了判断力。不知道该选择什么？一任最佳机会被别人利用而成就梦想。这说明什么？成功者的头脑和随时准备成功的素质。由此我想到了一个故事：

有三个人要被关进监狱三年，监狱长答应满足他们其中每人一个要求。其中，美国人要了三箱雪茄；法国人很浪漫，要了一个美丽的女子为伴；而犹太人则要了一部与外界沟通的电话。三年很快就过去了，第一个冲出监狱大门的美国人，嘴巴鼻孔耳朵里塞满了雪茄，大喊：给我火，给我火！原来监狱长给他只答应了一个条件，他无奈没有火点烟。

接下来走出的是法国人，只见他怀里抱着一个婴儿，美丽的女子手里还牵着一个小孩，挺起的大肚子里还怀着第三个。最后一个从监狱里走出来的是犹太人，他紧紧地抓住监狱长的手说：“这三年来我每天都在与外界联系，我的生意不但没有受到影响，反而增长了百分之200，为了表示谢意，我决定送你一辆劳斯莱斯！”。

命运并非机遇，而是对机遇的一种选择和把握，有的人对逆境中的不可多得的机遇当成了一种千载难逢的发展机会。英国人艾略特说：对于不会利用机会的人来说，机会又有什么用呢？人们在嘲笑美国人的贪婪的同时似乎不得不羡慕法国人的浪漫，在为法国人徒增的负担而感慨时，不能不承认犹太人精明。“弱者等待机遇。强者创造机遇”谁能把握机遇，谁能主动出击，谁就能改变命运。这是一个颠扑不破的真理！(irrefutable truth)

1. Quotations

2. Believe in yourself, that is the secret of success.

自信是成功的秘诀。

2. Every dog has his day.

凡人皆有得意日.（风水轮流转）。

3. Adversity makes a man wise, not rich.

逆境出人才。

4. Hope for the best, but prepare for the worst.

抱最好的愿望，做最坏的打算。

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5. Honesty is the best policy.

诚实才是上策。

6. Money doesn't grow on trees.

钱不是从天上掉下来的。

7. Knowledge is power.

知识就是力量。

8. A young idler, an old beggar.

少壮不努力，老大徒伤悲。

1. 对比观点型作文

The topic of 主题 is becoming the most popular one recently. There are two

sides of opinions about it. Some people say A is their favorites. They hold their

view for the reason of 支持A的理由一. What’s more, 理由二. Moreover 理由三.While

others think that B is a better choice in the following reasons. Firstly, 支持B 的理由一. Secondly 理由二. From my point of view, I think 我的观点. The reason

is that 原因一.

1. 对比观点型作文

Some people think A . In their opinion,重申支持A 的理由一， 理由二.

Others , however, B . They believe that 重申支持B的理由一 . 理由二，

To my mind, A 和B 都有道理 ，But A 更重要. 原因 .So 结论： 支持A .

1. Quotations

2. Nothing is impossible.

3. Try, try, try, and never say die.

4. Opportunity only visits the ready mind.

5. God helps those who help themselves.

6. When the Lord closes a door, somewhere he opens a window.

7. The weak wait for opportunities to come, while the strong are always creating

opportunities. -- Marie Curie

8. Beauty is everywhere for our eyes to see. We do not lack beauty but we lack

the ability to discover it. -- Auguste Rodin，a French sculptors

-- Romain

Rolland，a French thinker, writer

1. Quotations

2. Try once, this will help you to get over the fear of doing something.

3. Try twice, this will enable you to learn to do it.

4. Try three times, this way you will be able to see if you’re doing it not.

5. Words/phrases

In due course;/by all accounts;/cling to;

choose/cultivate/embrace/find/give/grasp/provide/seek/

seize/take/wait/offer;

lose/miss/neglect/overlook;

arise/arrive/go/occur/slip away;

favorable/glorious/golden/good/great/

valuable /unique

let no opportunity pass/neglect no opportunity of

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Different people have different views on opportunity. It is held

that there are few opportunities. But it is also held that there are opportunities

everywhere.

Those who hold the first opinion think that there are too many people

and so there is always an intense competition for limited opportunities. In contrast,

those who hold the second view think that if one is not prepared, he can hardly have

any opportunities or vice versa.

1. 范文1

As to me, I agree with the latter opinion. Admittedly, there

is really an intense competition for limited opportunities, but this is not to say

that one can’t create opportunities himself. In most cases opportunities are

created by people themselves. For example, many people have lost their jobs in recent

years. Some people wait for opportunities in vain. However, others create

opportunities themselves and get self-employed. Eventually they become employers

themselves.

Therefore, to some extent, one can take his destiny into his own hands.

1. 范文2

What is opportunity? Opportunity is a possibility or

premise(前提，假定）for a person to succeed in doing something. Everybody will meet

some opportunities during his life time. If he grasps one opportunity, maybe he can

benefit from it all life long.

We must admit that although everyone is likely to come across some

opportunity or other, chances are slim and elusive（难以达到）. Nobody grows up with

lot of opportunities all around. So the most important thing to learn is not to miss

when it turns up. Take … for example …

1. 范文2

Through the example， we can see opportunity is impartial and unbiased（公正，不偏不倚） to everyone. Whether or not we can find it depends on ourselves.

As an old saying goes : Opportunity only visits the ready mind. Let’s get ourselves

well equipped and fully prepared to seize every good opportunity that comes to our

hands.

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