2023课标版英语高考第一轮专题练习--第三部分 专题五 短文改错

2023课标版英语高考第一轮专题练习

第三部分 高考题型突破

专题五 短文改错

题组1 学校及家庭生活

Correction 1 [2022山西太原质监] 主题:学校宿舍生活 建议用时:8分钟

My life has changed since I become a senior three student. I mean that you live in the school dormitory rather

than at home. Honest speaking, my life in the dormitory is colorful and interested. In our spare time, my roommates

and I take in turns to do the cleaning regularly. We clean the floor or take out the garbage twice a day and clean the

windows once a week. Sometimes all of us sweep ground around our dormitory together. I do think doing the

cleaning are quite meaningful, because what I get is not only tidy but also friendship and a deep sense of

responsibility. I enjoy do the labor in the school dormitory.

Correction 2 [2022安徽名校联盟质检] 主题:班服设计比赛 建议用时:8分钟

To make us live a color school life and develop our creativity, our school holds a class uniform design

competition the other day. The competition caught a great number of students attention. A total of 40 works were

received, all of what were submitted through the Internet. There were various style of class uniforms. Some came

from the inspiration of nature, and some were reflected class mottoes. According to online voting, the work

presenting by Class 6, Senior 1 gained the most popularity because its unique design. The activity has become the

real hit at school and inspired more students to show our talents.

Correction 3 [2021东北三校联考] 主题:竞选年级长的经历 建议用时:8分钟

Last year, I ran for our school's senior three grade president. On the day of the election, I had to give a speech

in the front of the entire grade but I would talk about why I would make a good president. When it was my turns to

speak, I stood on the stage with butterflies in my stomach and my hands got sweat. Nervous although I was, I

explained the reasons why I dreamed being a grade president. I also talked about the ways I plan to accomplish my

goals. Unfortunately, I brought their speech to a nice conclusion. The audience gave me a round of applause and

chose me to be grade president. It was one of the most encouraged experiences of my life.

Correction 4 [2021河南洛阳统考] 主题:教爷爷用手机 建议用时:8分钟

My grandpa likes Peking Opera. In the past, I often saw him watching lots of such program on TV. However,

since last year, he had begun to watch Peking Opera shows on the mobile phone. When he got a smartphone send

by my father, I got the idea for teaching him how to use it. I instructed her to turn on the phone and watched the

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videos of Peking Opera. At the first, he could not follow me, but he listened with great careful. I taught him

patiently and he learned use it at last. Now not only can he enjoy the videos, and he can sing Peking Opera well.

Correction 5 [2021陕西咸阳一模] 主题:优秀家风的传承 建议用时:8分钟

In China, good family spirits, passing down from one generation to another, have a strong influence on their

child. Up till now, my grandfather and father always stressed the importance of honesty, brave, perseverance and

diligence. More importantly, they often set good examples to me. And thus I always follow which they have taught

me. For example, be friendly to others and offer a help when others are in need. Beside, I am positive all the time

but never stop chasing my goal whenever I come across difficulties. Thanks for those good family spirits, both my

life and study runs smoothly.

Correction 6 [2021江西南昌期中] 主题:父亲的建议 建议用时:8分钟

The best advice I received in my childhood was from my always gives me some advice,but I seldom

took them seriously. One day he was encouraged me to participate in a speech competition. So I signed up and after

the competition,I did my best to be fully the moment I stood on the stage,I was such nervous that my

mind completely went experience of lose a competition was really painful. Then my dad said, "My

son,life is like have to lose many time to win the final victory." Thanks to his advice, I never give

up when I do anything.

题组2 个人经历及梦想

Correction 7 [2022四川成都联考] 主题:助人就是助己 建议用时:8分钟

James, an exchange student, is one of my best friend. At the beginning, he asked if I could assist him with

what to use chopsticks. I said yes happily but this was a good chance to improving my spoken English as well when

I taught him. So I manage to make myself understood. When she was able to use chopsticks skillfully, I could

speak English fluent, which was beyond my expectations.

As the old saying goes, "Helping others are helping yourself." This experience not only brings me close friend

but also makes me to realize the meaning of cooperation.

Correction 8 [2022江西五校联考] 主题:一次不愉快的经历 建议用时:8分钟

Today I want to share terrible trip of mine with you. I visited a marine park with my friends yesterday. I am

sorry to say that I was disappointed with the service provide by the staff. When I came up to one of the waitresses

to ask the way, he was rather impatient, respond slowly and unwillingly. What's worse, the waitress even laughed

to me when I was about to leave. Besides, the steak I was ordered in the restaurant was so tough and salty which I

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could hardly enjoy it. At that time, the service also makes other customers disappointed. I sincere hope that the

person in charge will take measure to improve the service.

Correction 9 [2022广西名校联考] 主题:助人为乐 建议用时:8分钟

On the morning of last Saturday, I got up at six as usual. After a quickly breakfast, I went to the gym to work

out. I spent two hours do exercise there. Then I took shower in a bathhouse, where is very close to my school.

While I was walking on the crowded street, I notice an old lady who didn't look well. When she saw me, she signed

to me and asked that I could take her home. At first, I was hesitated for a minute but then decided to give her a hand.

About twenty minute later, we arrived at the apartment. She was grateful for me and invited me to her home. I

polite refused and left.

Correction 10 [2021山西太原期末] 主题:梦想当医生 建议用时:8分钟

We are in the last year of high school. It's time for us to have clear future career plan. Since my childhood, I

had been dreaming of becoming a doctor. When known Tu Youyou was awarded the Nobel Prize, I was great

inspired by her to learn medicine. Especially this year, the spirit of doctors has hardened our determination to study

medicine to save people's lives. It is their wisdom and efforts which have saved tens of thousand of people.

Difficult though it is to make my dream to come true, something will stop me achieving it. I will concentrate on my

study to get ready to my future major in college.

Correction 11 [2021江西南昌三模] 主题:爬长城 建议用时:8分钟

This morning my friends and me got up early to visit the Great Wall. Once we got there we began our climb. It

started out pretty smooth. By the time we made it to the top we had been sweaty and exhausting. But when the

Great Wall appeared in front of us, we couldn't help cry, "What wonderful sight it is! "We shouted," It looked like a

huge snake which spreads through half of the city!" We walked along the Wall for a while after heading back down

and making our way back to home. We felt very proud so it's the longest wall and one of the most famous tourist

attraction in the world.

Correction 12 [2021黑龙江大庆实验中学考试] 主题:发现城市的美 建议用时:8分钟

People always say that we lack of the eyes of realizing the beauty in life. I can't agree complete. Last Friday, I

wake up very early and decided to take a the square which many senior citizens were dancing,I found

several elders absorbed in feeding t many cars produce smog on the street,I realized that the city

looked so clean and beautiful. Some coffee shops, which used to be old but shabby,were decorated pretty well and

they caught my both side of the street were big trees covering the whole city,making comfortable to

walk in the that moment,I found a city was so I regret ignore its beauty before!

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答 案

专题五 短文改错

题组1 学校及家庭生活

Correction 1

My life has changed since I become a senior three student. I mean that you live in the school

①became②Idormitory rather than at home. Honest speaking, my life in the dormitory is colorful and interested . In

③Honestly④interestingour spare time, my roommates and I take turns to do the cleaning regularly. We clean the floor or

⑥andtake out the garbage twice a day and clean the windows once a week. Sometimes all of us sweep ∧ground

⑦thearound our dormitory together. I do think doing the cleaning are quite meaningful, because what I get is not

⑧isonly tidy but also friendship and a deep sense of responsibility. I enjoy do the labor in the school

⑨tidiness⑩doingdormitory.

①时态误用。分析句子结构可知,since在此处引导时间状语从句,主句用现在完成时,从句一般用一般过去时,且此处描述的"我成为一名高三学生"是过去发生的事情,所以需要将become改为became。

②人称代词误用。根据语境可知,本文讲的是作者的生活变化,为第一人称,所以需要将you改为I。

③形容词副词混用。此处考查固定表达Honestly speaking,意为"老实说",所以需要将Honest改为Honestly。

④形容词误用。结合语境可知,此处形容的是my life in the dormitory,表示"有趣的",要用interesting,所以需要将interested改为interesting。

⑤介词多用。此处考查固定表达take turns to do sth.,意为"轮流做某事",所以需要去掉turns前面的in。

⑥连词误用。分析句子结构可知,扫地和倒垃圾形成了并列关系,所以需要将or改为and。

⑦冠词漏用。ground表"地面"时常用the ground,且后面有around our dormitory修饰,表特指,所以需要在ground前面加the。

⑧谓语动词误用。从句的主语是doing the cleaning,谓语动词要用单数形式,所以需要将are改为is。

⑨形容词名词混用。分析句子结构可知,此处与后面的名词friendship形成递进关系,要用名词,所以需要将tidy改为tidiness。

⑩动词形式误用。此处考查固定用法enjoy doing sth.,意为"喜欢做某事",所以需要将do改为doing。

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Correction 2

To make us live a color school life and develop our creativity, our school holds a class uniform

①colorful②helddesign competition the other day. The competition caught a great number of students attention. A total of 40

③students’works were received, all of what were submitted through the Internet. There were various style of

④which⑤stylesclass uniforms. Some came from the

According to online voting, the work

inspiration of nature, and some reflected class mottoes.

presenting by Class 6, Senior 1 gained the most popularity because ∧ its unique design. The activity has

⑦presented⑧ofbecome the real hit at school and inspired more students to show our talents.

⑨a⑩their①名词形容词混用。此处修饰后面的名词词组school life,要用形容词,所以需要将color改为colorful。

②时态误用。分析句子结构可知,此处在句中作谓语,根据时间状语the other day可知,本句的时态为一般过去时,所以需要将holds改为held。

③名词所有格误用。分析句子结构可知,此处修饰后面的名词attention,要用名词所有格,所以需要将students改为students'。

④关系词误用。分析句子结构可知,本句为非限制性定语从句,修饰先行词works,关系词在介词of后,所以需要将what改为which。

【注意】 what不能引导定语从句。

⑤名词单复数误用。根据前面的谓语动词were和形容词various可知,此处要用名词复数,所以需要将style改为styles。

⑥语态误用。主语some与谓语动词reflected之间为主动关系,所以需要删除reflected前面的were。

⑦非谓语动词形式误用。分析句子结构可知,present与work构成逻辑上的动宾关系,所以需要将presenting改为presented。

⑧介词漏用。because后面接句子,而because of后面接词或词组,所以需要在because后面加of。

⑨冠词混用。根据"活动在校园里大获成功"可知,此处表泛指,且real的发音以辅音音素开头,所以需要将the改为a。hit"很受欢迎的人(或事物)"。

⑩代词误用。根据"激发更多的学生展示他们的才艺"可知,此处需要将our改为their。

Correction 3

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Last year, I ran for our school's senior three grade president. On the day of the election, I had to give a speech

in front of the entire grade but I would talk about why I would make a good president. When

②andit was my turns to speak, I stood on the stage with butterflies in my stomach and my hands got sweat .

③turn④sweaty⑥of/aboutNervous although I was, I explained the reasons why I dreamed

⑤as/though∧ being a grade president. I also

talked about the ways I plan to accomplish my goals. Unfortunately , I brought their speech to a

⑦planned⑧Fortunately⑨mynice conclusion. The audience gave me a round of applause and chose me to be grade president. It was one of the

most encouraged experiences of my life.

⑩encouraging①冠词多用。此处表示在整个年级的面前,应用in front of, in the front of 表示"在……的前部(物体内部)"。故删除front前面的the。

②连词误用。根据语境可知,此处表示顺承,故将but 改为and。

③名词单复数误用。It is/was sb.'s turn to do sth.为固定用法,表示"轮到某人做某事",故把turns 改为turn。

【拓展】 turn作名词时的其他常见搭配:take turns to do sth.轮流做某事;in turn依次,轮流,相应地。

④名词形容词混用。get是系动词,后接形容词构成系表结构,表示"变得……",故把sweat改为sweaty。

⑤连词误用。此处把表语放在句首,采用了让步状语从句的倒装结构,所以应用as/though 引导。故把although

改为as/though。

【注意】 although, though, as, while都可以引导让步状语从句,但是若引导的让步状语从句为倒装语序,只能用as或though;不是倒装语序时,则可用although/though/while,但不能用as。

⑥介词漏用。表示"想象/梦想做某事"用固定短语dream of/about doing sth.。此处缺少介词。故在dreamed 后面添加of/about。

⑦时态误用。分析句子结构可知,the ways 之后是定语从句,主句时态是一般过去时,此处表示"我计划实现目标的方法",做计划也是过去发生的事,时态应和主句保持一致,故把plan改为 planned。注意plan的过去式要双写n再加-ed。

⑧副词误用。根据下文可知,我给我的演讲做了一个不错的总结,所以此处应该是"幸运的是",故把Unfortunately 改为Fortunately。

⑨代词误用。根据上文可知,此处表示"我的演讲",所以应用代词my。 故把their改为my。

⑩形容词误用。 此处修饰后面的experiences, 表示"鼓舞人心的",故应用encouraging。encouraged表示"受到鼓舞的",常修饰人。故把encouraged 改为encouraging。

Correction 4

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My grandpa likes Peking Opera. In the past, I often saw him watching lots of such program on TV.

①programsHowever, since last year, he had begun to watch Peking Opera shows on the mobile phone. When he got a

②hassmartphone send by my father, I got the idea for teaching him how to use it. I instructed her to

③sent④of⑤himturn on the phone and watched the videos of

⑥watchPeking Opera. At first, he could not follow me, but

he listened with great careful . I taught him patiently and he learned ∧ use it at last. Now not only can

⑧care/carefulness⑨tohe enjoy the videos, and he can sing Peking Opera well.

⑩but①名词单复数误用。program"(电视、广播)节目"是一个可数名词,根据前面的lots of可知,此处要用复数形式,所以将program改为programs。

②时态误用。根据前面的时间状语since last year可知,本句要用现在完成时,所以需要将had改为has。

【点拨】 现在完成时和过去完成时都表示动作发生在过去,但是二者的时间参照点是不一样的。现在完成时的时间参照点为现在,而过去完成时表示"过去的过去",因此它的时间参照点是过去的某个时间点。

③动词形式误用。分析句子结构并根据by my father可知,smartphone与send为逻辑上的动宾关系,需用过去分词作后置定语,所以需要将send改为sent。

④介词混用。结合语境"我有了教他如何使用手机的想法"可知,此处要用of,所以需要将for改为of。an idea of

doing sth.做某事的想法;an idea for doing sth.对于做某事的想法。

⑤人称代词混用。结合语境"我指导他(我的爷爷)开机"可知,此处指的是"我的爷爷",所以需要将her改为him。

⑥动词形式误用。分析句子结构可知,watch与前面的turn on并列,都是"我"指导爷爷做的事情,所以需要将watched改为watch。

⑦冠词多用。此处考查固定表达at first,意为"起初",所以需要去掉first前面的the。

⑧形容词名词混用。结合形容词great可知,此处要用名词,所以需要将careful改为care/carefulness。

⑨不定式符号漏用。此处考查固定表达learn to do sth.,意为"学会做某事",所以需要在use前面加to。

⑩连词误用。此处考查固定表达"but (also)...",意为"不仅……而且……",所以需要将and改为but。

Correction 5

In China, good family spirits, passing down from one generation to another, have a strong influence on

①passedtheir child . Up till now, my grandfather and father

②children③have∧always stressed the importance of honesty,

brave , perseverance and diligence. More importantly, they often set good examples to me. And thus I always

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follow which they have taught me. For example, be friendly to others and offer help when others are

⑤whatin need. Beside , I am positive all the time but never stop chasing my goal whenever I come across

⑦Besides⑧anddifficulties. Thanks for those good family spirits, both my life and study runs smoothly.

⑨to⑩run①非谓语动词形式误用。分析句子结构可知,本句的谓语动词是have,此处应为非谓语动词,且与其逻辑主语good family spirits之间为动宾关系,所以需要将passing改为passed。

②名词单复数误用。根据语境"代代相传的家风对家族的孩子们有强烈的影响"并结合常识可知,家族的孩子不止一个,此处要用复数,所以需要将child改为children。

③时态误用。根据本句的时间状语Up till now可知,本句要用现在完成时,且主语my grandfather and father表复数概念,所以需要在always前面加have。

④形容词名词混用。分析句子结构可知,此处应用名词形式与前后的名词并列,所以需要将brave改为bravery。

⑤引导词误用。分析句子结构可知,此处引导宾语从句,在从句中作宾语,表示"……的事情",所以需要将which改为what。

⑥冠词多用。help作"帮助"讲时,是不可数名词,所以需要将help前面的a删除。

⑦介词副词混用。beside意为"在旁边",besides意为"此外",根据语境可知,此处表递进,所以需要将Beside改为Besides。

⑧连词误用。结合语境"此外,我一直积极,并且无论何时遇到困难,从不会放弃追逐我的目标"可知,前后为递进关系,所以需要将but改为and。

⑨介词误用。此处考查固定表达thanks to,意为"幸亏,由于",所以需要将for改为to。

⑩谓语动词误用。本句时态为一般现在时,主语both my life and study表复数概念,谓语动词要用复数形式,所以需要将runs改为run。

【提醒】 连接的名词短语通常表示复数概念,不可误以为其表示整体。

Correction 6

The best advice I received in my childhood was from my always gives me some advice,but I

①gaveseldom took them seriously. One

②itday he encouraged me to participate in a speech competition. So I

signed up and after the competition,I did my best to be fully prepared. And the moment I stood on the

④before⑤Butstage,I was such nervous that my mind completely went blankly .The experience of lose a

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competition was really painful. Then my dad said, "My son,life is like ∧ have to lose

⑨amany time to win the final victory." Thanks to his advice, I never give up when I do anything.

⑩times①时态误用。纵观全文可知,文章描述的是过去的事情,故此处也应用一般过去时,故将gives改为gave。

②代词误用。此处指代上文提到的some advice, advice为不可数名词,故应用it指代。

③语态误用。句子主语he与谓语动词encourage之间为主动关系,应用主动语态,故将was删除。

④介词误用。根据后文的"be fully prepared"可知,此处应该是在比赛前做准备,故应将after改为before。

⑤连词误用。上文提到"be fully prepared",下文提到"nervous",由此可知此处表示转折关系,故应用But。

⑥形容词副词混用。此处修饰形容词nervous,应用副词so。such修饰名词。

⑦副词形容词混用。此处go是系动词,表示"变得",其后应跟形容词作表语,故将blankly改为blank。

⑧动词形式误用。介词of后应用动词-ing形式作宾语,故将lose改为losing。

⑨冠词漏用。battlefield为可数名词,此处泛指"战场",且battlefield的发音以辅音音素开头,故应用不定冠词a。

⑩名词单复数误用。time在此处表示"次数",为可数名词,且其前有修饰可数名词复数的标志性词语many,故此处应用复数形式times。

题组2 个人经历及梦想

Correction 7

James, an exchange student, is one of my best friend . At the beginning, he asked if I could assist him

①friendswith what to use chopsticks. I said yes happily but this was a good chance to improving my

②how③because④improvespoken English as well when I taught him. So I manage to make myself understood. When she was

⑤managed⑥heable to use chopsticks skillfully, I could speak English fluent , which was beyond my expectations.

⑦fluentlyAs the old saying goes, "Helping others are helping yourself." This experience not only brings me ∧

⑧is⑨aclose friend but also

makes me realize the meaning of cooperation.

①名词单复数误用。one of后接可数名词复数形式,friend为可数名词,故用其复数形式。

②特殊疑问词误用。根据语境可知,该处指"帮助他(学会)如何使用筷子",故应用how+动词不定式。

③连词误用。根据语境可知,该句上下文之间为因果关系,故用because引导原因状语从句。

④非谓语动词形式误用。该句中的to为动词不定式符号,故其后应用动词原形而非动词-ing。

⑤时态误用。根据语境可知,该处陈述的是过去发生的事情,故应用一般过去时。

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⑥人称代词误用。根据上文中的"James"以及"he""him"可知,该处应用he。

⑦形容词副词混用。该处修饰动词speak,应用副词。

⑧谓语动词误用。该句主语为动词-ing短语"Helping others",谓语动词应用第三人称单数。

⑨冠词漏用。该处泛指"一位亲密的朋友",且close的发音以辅音音素开头,故用不定冠词a。

⑩不定式符号多用。make sb. do sth.意为"使某人做某事",其中make后面的不定式短语要省略to,故删去to。

Correction 8

Today I want to share ∧ terrible trip of mine with you. I

①avisited a marine park with my friends

yesterday. I am sorry to say that I was disappointed with the service provide by the staff. When I came up to

②providedone of the waitresses to ask the way, he was rather impatient, respond slowly and unwillingly. What's

③she④respondingworse, the waitress even laughed to me when I was about to leave. Besides, the steak I ordered in the

⑤atrestaurant was so tough and salty which I could hardly enjoy it. At that time, the service also makes

⑦that⑧madeother customers disappointed. I sincere hope that the person in charge will take measure to improve

⑨sincerely⑩measuresthe service.

①冠词漏用。结合语境可知,作者在分享一次糟糕的经历,此处表泛指,且terrible的发音以辅音音素开头,所以需要在terrible前加a。

②动词形式误用。分析句子结构可知,此处为非谓语动词短语作后置定语,provide与前面的名词service之间为逻辑上的动宾关系,所以需要将provide改为provided。

③人称代词误用。结合语境可知,此处指的是前面提到的"one of the waitresses",所以需要将he改为she。

④动词形式误用。分析句子结构可知,此处为非谓语动词短语作状语,respond与主语she之间为逻辑上的主谓关系,所以需要将respond改为responding。

⑤介词误用。laugh at sb.是固定搭配,意为"嘲笑某人",所以需要将to改为at。

⑥语态误用。根据句意"我在餐厅点的牛排太硬了"可知,I与order之间为主谓关系,应用主动语态,所以需要删除ordered前面的was。

⑦固定搭配误用。分析句子结构可知,此处形成了固定搭配"so...",意为"如此……以至于……",引导结果状语从句,所以需要将which改为that。

⑧时态误用。结合语境可知,本文讲的是作者昨天的经历,时态应为一般过去时,所以需要将makes改为made。

⑨形容词副词混用。分析句子结构可知,此处修饰后面的动词hope,要用副词,所以需要将sincere改为sincerely。

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⑩名词单复数误用。measure作"措施,方法"讲时为可数名词,其前无限定词,应用复数形式,所以需要将measure改为measures。

Correction 9

On the morning of last Saturday, I got up at six as usual. After a quickly breakfast, I went to the gym to

①quickwork out. I spent two hours do exercise there. Then I took ∧ shower in a bathhouse, where is very

②doing③a④whichclose to my school. While I was walking on the crowded street, I notice an old lady who didn't look well.

⑤noticedWhen she saw me, she signed to me and asked that I

⑥if/whethercould take her home. At first, I

hesitated for a minute but then decided to give her a hand. About twenty minute later, we arrived at the

⑧minutesapartment. She was grateful for me and invited me to her home. I polite refused and left.

⑨to⑩politely①副词形容词混用。修饰名词breakfast,应用形容词quick作定语。故quickly改为quick。

②动词形式误用。spend time (in) doing sth.为固定搭配,意为"花时间做某事"。故do改为doing。

【拓展】 其他类似短语或句式:be busy (in) doing sth.;have difficulty/trouble (in) doing sth.;There is no point

(in) doing sth.。

③冠词漏用。shower"淋浴"为可数名词,take a shower为固定搭配,意为"洗淋浴"。故在shower前加a。

④关系词误用。此处为非限制性定语从句,关系词在从句中作主语,先行词为bathhouse,指物,故应用关系代词which。故where改为which。

⑤时态误用。根据上文可知,事情发生在上周六早上,应用一般过去时。故notice改为noticed。

⑥引导词误用。此处为宾语从句,根据句意可知,此处表示"是否",应用if或whether。故that改为if/whether。

⑦语态误用。主语I与hesitate为主动关系。故删掉hesitated前的was。

⑧名词单复数误用。minute"分钟"为可数名词,由twenty可知此处应用复数形式。故minute改为minutes。

⑨介词误用。be grateful to sb.为固定搭配,意为"感激某人"。故for改为to。

【注意】 grateful也可与for搭配,但for后通常跟感谢的原因,be grateful to sb. for sth."因某事感激某人"。

⑩形容词副词混用。修饰动词refused应用副词politely。故polite改为politely。

Correction 10

We are in the last year of high school. It's time for us to have ∧ clear future career plan. Since my childhood,

①aI had been dreaming of becoming a doctor. When known Tu Youyou was awarded the Nobel Prize, I

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was great inspired by her to learn medicine. Especially this year, the spirit of doctors has hardened our

④greatly⑤mydetermination to study medicine to save people's lives. It is their wisdom and efforts which have saved tens

⑥thatof thousand of people. Difficult though it is to make my dream come true, something will stop me

⑦thousands⑨nothingachieving it. I will concentrate on my study to get ready to my future major in college.

⑩for①冠词漏用。此处表示"我们是时候有一个清晰的未来职业规划了",此处表泛指,且clear的发音以辅音音素开头,所以在clear前加不定冠词a。

②时态误用。根据时间状语"Since my childhood"及语境可知,此处应用现在完成进行时,所以将had改为have。

③动词形式误用。know与其逻辑主语I之间为主谓关系,所以将known改为knowing。

④形容词副词混用。此处修饰谓语动词,应用副词形式,所以将great改为greatly。

⑤人称代词误用。此处表示"特别是今年,医生们的精神坚定了我学医救人的决心",文中讲述的是"我"的决心,所以将our改为my。

⑥固定句型误用。分析句子结构可知,本句是一个强调句"",强调的是主语their wisdom and efforts,所以将which改为that。

⑦数词误用。此处考查固定表达tens of thousands of,意为"数以万计的",所以将thousand 改为thousands。

⑧不定式符号多用。此处考查固定表达make sth. do (sth.),所以将come前的to删除。

⑨不定代词误用。此处表示"没有什么会阻挡我实现梦想",所以将something改为nothing。

⑩介词误用。此处考查固定短语get ready for,意为"为……做准备",所以将to改为for。

Correction 11

This morning my friends and me got up early to visit the Great Wall. Once we got there we began our

①Iclimb. It started out pretty smooth . By the time we made it to the top we had been sweaty and

②smoothly exhausting . But when the Great Wall appeared in front of us, we couldn't help cry , "What ∧

③exhausted④crying⑤awonderful sight it is!" We shouted," It looked like a huge snake which spreads through half of the city!"We

⑥lookswalked along the Wall for a while after

⑦beforeheading back down and making our way back home.

We felt very proud so it's the longest wall and one of the most famous tourist

⑨because/as/since/that attraction in the world.

⑩attractions①人称代词误用。分析该句结构可知,该处和my friends同为句子的主语,故用主格。

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②形容词副词混用。该处修饰动词短语started out,故用副词形式。

③形容词误用。该句主语为we,指人,此处表示"疲惫不堪的",故用形容词exhausted。exhausting表示"使人疲惫不堪的",通常用来形容物。

④固定搭配误用。sb. can't help doing sth.为固定搭配,意为"某人忍不住做某事",故用crying。

⑤冠词漏用。 该句是由What引导的感叹句,sight在该处为可数名词,该处泛指"美妙的景象",应用"what+a/an+形容词+可数名词单数+主语+谓语"结构,又wonderful的发音以辅音音素开头,故加上不定冠词a。

⑥时态误用。此处是直接引语,陈述的是客观情况,故用一般现在时。

⑦介词误用。根据语境可知,沿着长城走一段时间发生在回家之前,故用介词before。

⑧介词多用。此处home是副词,其前不用介词to。

⑨从句连接词误用。根据语境可知,该处前后部分为因果关系,前果后因,故用because或as或since;该处也可看成是that引导的宾语从句,作形容词proud的宾语,故也可用that。

⑩名词单复数误用。one of后接可数名词的复数形式。tourist attraction"旅游胜地"为可数名词词组,故该处用复数形式。

Correction 12

People always say that we lack the eyes of realizing the beauty in life. I can't agree complete .

②completelyLast Friday, I wake up very early and decided to take a the square which many senior citizens

③woke④wherewere dancing,I found several elders absorbed in feeding t many cars produce smog on the

⑤producingstreet,I realized that the city looked so clean and beautiful. Some coffee shops, which used to be old but

⑥andshabby,were decorated pretty well and they caught my both side of the street were big trees

⑦sidescovering the whole city,making ∧ comfortable to walk in the city. At that moment,I found a city was so

⑧it⑨ I regret ignore its beauty before!

⑩ignoring①介词多用。此处lack为及物动词,其后直接跟宾语,of多余。

②形容词副词混用。此处修饰动词agree,应用副词completely。

③时态误用。根据时间状语"Last Friday"可知,此处描述过去发生的事情,应用一般过去时,故将wake改为woke。

④关系词误用。分析句子结构可知,此处为定语从句,修饰先行词square(表示地点),从句缺少状语,故应用关系副词where引导。

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⑤动词形式误用。此处为"without+宾语+宾补"结构,many cars与produce为逻辑上的主谓关系,故应用producing作宾语补足语。

⑥连词误用。此处old与shabby为语义上一致的平行关系,故应用连词and。

⑦名词单复数误用。根据句中的"both"可知,此处side应用复数形式。

⑧代词漏用。此处为"make it + adj. + to do sth."结构,it在句中作形式宾语,不能省略,故在making后加it。

⑨冠词误用。此处特指"这座城市",应用定冠词the。

⑩动词形式误用。结合语境可知,"我"后悔以前忽视了美。regret doing sth"后悔做过某事",故将ignore改为ignoring。

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