读后续写人与动物--狗狗救人学案 高三英语二轮专题+

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那天，妈妈让我从犬舍里挑一只宠物狗，戴安娜过来开始咬我On the day when my mother let me choose a pet dog from the kennel, Diana came over and started biting my shoelaces. She was playfully jump的鞋带。她跳来跳去，，非常调皮。从ing around and licking me. I knew from the mo我第一眼看到她的那ment I set my eyes on her that she was the perfect dog for me. And, for some reason, her great energy was everything that I needed in my life.

是我理想中的狗狗。而且，出于某种原因，她旺盛的精力正是我生活中所需要的。

我们住在一个偏远的地方，妈妈不喜欢我We lived in a remote area, and my mother didn'放学后带戴安娜出去t like me walking Diana too late after school. But I was a teenager and loved going against the

rules, so I ignored her warnings and set out later

than usual that day.

年，喜欢反抗规则，所以我当天无视了她的警告，比平时更晚地出门了。

太晚。但我是个青少一刻起，我就知道她

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当太阳落山时，我情不自禁地感到紧张。As the sun set, I couldn't help but feel nervou关于迷路的念头涌上s. Thoughts flooded my head about losing my way. Or, worse still, some frightening creature came

心头。更糟糕的是，out of the dark unexpectedly. The hairs on the b一些可怕的生物可能ack of my arms stood on end(可以积累这一句).

会突然从黑暗中出现。我胳膊上的汗毛都竖起来了。

我深呼吸试图平静下来。我环顾四周，勉强能看到一个干涸的I took a deep breath to try to calm my nerves.

I looked around and could just make out the ope湖泊。我知道我的家n surface of a dried-up lake. I knew that my ho离这里不远。以前我me wasn't far away. I had never walked across the lake before, and my mother had warned against it, but I just wanted to get home quickly. S也警告过我不要这么从未穿过湖泊，妈妈o, rather than going all the way around the lak做，但我只想尽快回e, I decided I'd feel safer taking the shortcut across the lake.

走一大圈，我决定走湖泊的捷径会更安全。

家。所以，与其绕湖

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戴安娜先走。在昏暗的光线下，我看到她Diana went first. In the dark light, I could see that the mud directly below her paws was dry. Following her, I stepped out onto the lake, but my

脚下的泥土是干的。我跟着她走到湖上，foot went in a little deeper than expected. Cautio但我的脚比预想的要usly, I took a second step. Diana pulled me forward. Suddenly I lost my balance. Below the hard-looking surface was wet-mud soup. I was sinkin翼地迈出第二步。戴深陷一些。我小心翼g deeper.（陷入泥沼之中，这与蚌埠市2023届高安娜拉着我向前。突三年级第四次教学质量检查考试—读后续写（23.5.然，我失去了平衡。5）[流沙地脱险]很相似）

看似坚硬的表面下是一片湿泥。我陷得越来越深。

Diana started to bark. She knew something was

戴安娜开始叫了起wrong. She jumped back to the side of the lake and

来。她知道出了问题。landed on the hard ground. I saw her reach the safety

of the shore.

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她跳回到湖边，落在了坚硬的地面上。我To my amazement, Diana grabbed the leash in her

看到她安全地到达了mouth and started to pull me.

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"What on earth has happened?" my mother asked.（根岸边。

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令我惊讶的是，戴安

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据这句话，应该是小狗狗已经把我救上来了，妈妈娜用嘴巴咬住了牵引看到我浑身泥泞，于是问道：“发生了什么？”） 绳，开始拉我。

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"到底发生了什么事？"妈妈问道。

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To my amazement, Diana grabbed the leash in her mouth and started to

pull dug her paws into the hard ground, using all her strength to drag

me out of the muddy trap. As she pulled, I tried to lift my legs, making it easier

for her to save me. I was exhausted, but Diana's determination kept me

going. With her unwavering endeavour, I felt the mud release its grip on me. It

wasn't long before we both reached the safety of the shore, totally drained but

relieved. I hugged her tight, overcome with gratitude, and then we walked

home together.

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"What on earth has happened?" my mother asked. She came rushing out of

the house, alerted by Diana's barking. I looked down at my mud-caked clothes

and tears started streaming down my face. Between sobs, I told my mother

about how I had nearly drowned in the lake. She scolded me for disobeying her

warnings not to cross the lake. But when she saw Diana by my side, her

expression softened with relief and gratitude. Diana stayed by my side, her tail

wagging vigorously, as if she knew she had saved my that day on, I

realized the importance of listening to my mother's advice and the incredible

bond that I shared with Diana. She wasn't just a pet; she was my hero.

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To my amazement, Diana grabbed the leash in her mouth and started to pull me.

She did it with her full strength. She was trying to save me, and it was working.

Her pulls were enough to help me inch forward. Once I was pulled close

enough, I reached forward and grabbed at the bushes. I dragged myself out of

the mud with all my might. Tired and afraid, I went back to the safety of our

home. My mother was there when I walked in the door with mud all over

me."What on earth has happened?"my mother asked. "I didn't listen to your

warnings. I'm sorry, mom,"I replied sheepishly. Having learnt what had

happened to Diana and me, my mother said I should learn a lesson from it,

touching Diana's head thankfully. Looking down at Diana's loving eyes, I knew

that I had been right to trust my natural sense on the day I chose her. Her great

energy was more than something I just needed in my life. Because of it, I was

saved.

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It was a Monday and Khan, a pet dog had joined the family the previous

Friday. He had already decided that two-year-old Charlotte was-his No.1 girl.

The dog had seldom left her side since arriving at his new home.

Khan was next to Charlotte when Catherine took her into the garden for

some fresh air. “I was just in the house doing boring mother things and

Charlotte wanted to go outside and run around,” she says. “We were just

walking around the garden looking at flowers and all that good stuff. Khan was

with her.”

Charlotte was soon tired of playing in the garden and then went to play the

padlock on the gate. “She was beating the padlock and it was banging on the

gate,” Catherine recalls. She thought Khan, who was naturally right next to

Charlotte, might be disturbed by the loud noise, but he seemed undisturbed by it.

That was until, entirely without warning, he became very upset indeed.

“Khan suddenly started making this noise from the depths of his chest, this

growl,” she says. “His whole chest puffed up, his hair stood up, and he lowered

his head. He continued to make this growl.”

As Catherine watched, Khan seemed to double in size. “He kept trying to

push her. I was right next to Charlotte—no more than a metre away and I

thought, ‘He’s going to hurt her’. His chest was bigger than he was long,” she

says.

Time seemed to slow down as Catherine rushed desperately to save her

daughter. But Khan got to Charlotte first. He grabbed her by the back of her

clothes and threw her over his shoulder into the garden. “I turned and looked

and she was just sitting there in a pile of grass.” Still not certain whether

Khan’s strange behaviour was some sort of attack on her child, Catherine raced

to pick up Charlotte, who was completely unharmed, and take her inside to

safety. Just as she turned to run into the house, Catherine saw a big brown snake

bite Khan right in the chest and slid away quickly.

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Khan screamed in pain and at the same moment, Catherine understood all.

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Khan needed immediate medical help, so Catherine called a vet (兽医) in

no time.

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参考答案

Khan noticed a snake going to bit little Charlotte, and Khan’s action that

seemed violent at first was really an attempt to save the girl’s life. Although his

brave action was performed just in time to take Charlotte away from the snake’s

bite, he instead was bitten a few moments later.

Khan needed immediate medical help, so Catherine called a vet (兽医) in no

time. Thanks to the vet who recovered Khan by giving him an anti-venom shot.

If Khan had not stepped in at the right moment, the poisonous snake would have

been likely to strike Catherine’s daughter instead. Although it was only four

days Khan had lived with this new family, this hero still knew the right thing to

do, and he protected Charlotte’s life with his own. The family planned to give

Khan his deserved home as a way of paying him back for the love he

demonstrated to their family in such a wonderful way.