读后续写素材之情绪变化讲义-高三英语一轮复习

读后续写 如何描写震惊/惊吓/赞叹的情绪

四种情绪描写的方法

一、直接描写，即句中直接出现表示情绪的单词或短语。如: To his dismay, he failed to

pass the test for a second time.

二、间接描写，即通过神情和肢体动作来体现人物的某种情绪。如：He slammed the door

behind him before Mon could say a word.

三、比喻句，即对人物特征进行描绘，给人深刻的印象同时渲染氛围。

四、环境描写，即通过描写环境，侧面烘托出人物的情绪，有画面定格的感觉。

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惊讶/惊吓/赞叹的情绪表达

Surprised/amazed/astonished/astounded/stunned/shocked(震惊的)/startled//alarmed(惊吓的)

Thunderstruck/dumbfounded/staggered/ speechless(大吃一惊）

Sb was thrown into a state of astonishment/shock/amazement

It came as a surprise/shock to

Much/Greatly to one’s

Beyond one’s expectation

Sb be shocked/astonished beyond words

Be rooted/glued to the spot, speechless

Sb glued one’s eyes to sth, utterly dumbfounded/ one’s eyes kept glued to something

Sb froze/be numb/stand still/ stop dead with shock/astonishment惊呆了

Sb stood unblinking, trying to process what he had just been told

Stiffen with shock僵住了

Sb stood with his mouth wide open/ agape

One’s eyes grew wide in astonishment

Wide-eyed/ one’s eyes widened in alarm

jaw almost dropped/fell in astonishment(惊掉了下巴)

gasp in astonishment 吃惊地倒吸一口冷气

Sb froze like a piece of wood/ a statue

Sb sat motionlessly there and stared straight ahead, barely blinking, like a statue.

Despite her best efforts to remain unaffected, her raised eyebrows betrayed her astonishment.

I stared at him in shock and a faint sound of surprise escaped my throat.

Never was I more staggered in my life. 《小妇人》

I jumped to my feet, completely thunderstruck. I blinked my eyes hard. I looked carefully all around me.《小王子》

写作例句

将ABCD通过排列组合的方式，串成一个画面完整的语句。

① Utterly thunderstruck, she glued her eyes to the box, deprived of the power

of speech and froze like a piece of wood.

② Numb with shock, she was unable to utter a complete

sentence, looking straight into the box, her eyes widened.

③ The instant she opened the box, she gapsed in astonishement, blarely blikning,

as if turned into a statue.

④ Hardly had she unwrapped the box when she was thrown into a state of

astonishment, jaws dropping to the ground and unable to believe what was lying

in front of her eyes.

读后续写 如何描写紧张/焦虑/害怕的情绪

四种情绪描写的方法

一、直接描写，即句中直接出现表示情绪的单词或短语。如: To his dismay, he failed to pass the

test for a second time.

二、间接描写，即通过神情和肢体动作来体现人物的某种情绪。如：He slammed the door behind

him before Mon could say a word.

三、比喻句，即对人物特征进行描绘，给人深刻的印象同时渲染氛围。

四、环境描写，即通过描写环境，侧面烘托出人物的情绪，有画面定格的感觉。

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Nervous/anxious/apprehensive/panicked/terrified/horrified/frightened

Panic/anxiety terror seized/took hold of/ got the better of /gripped sb

A pang of fear/panic/anxiety crept on/upon sb

Be thrown into a state of panic

Panic-stricken/startled

a hair-raising adventure/story

Tremble/shiver/quiver with panic/fright

Be frozen with fear

Be rooted/glued to the spot, too scared to move an inch

One’s hair stood on ends

Sb bite his fingers restlessly.

One’s teeth chattered uncontrollably

Pace back and forth

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Clutch the corner of clothes tightly

One’s face turned pale and stood there tongue-tied

Her eyes flicked back and forth.

A chill ran down Josh’s spine.

One’s heart skipped a beat.

Be numb with a blank mind

Mouth wide open/ agape with horror

Palms sweat/one’s palms were drenched with sweat

throat tightened

One’s blood turned to ice

Sb shook all over, feeling like sitting on pins and needles.

got butterflies in one’s stomach

went as pale as a ghost

felt as if his heart would jump out of his throat

heart pounded like drums

写作例句

将ABCD通过排列组合的方式，串成一个画面完整的语句。

① A pang of panic seizing the boy, his face turned as pale as a ghost, unable to move

an inch.

② Panic-stricken, Jenny was shivering uncontrollably, her heart pounding like drums.

③ Pacing back and forth, the girl clutched the corner of her clothes tightly, her

palms drenched with sweat.

④ Trembling with fear, she shook all over, her face pale, standing there tong-tied.

读后续写 如何描写尴尬+羞愧的情绪

四种情绪描写的方法

一、直接描写，即句中直接出现表示情绪的单词或短语。如: To his dismay, he failed to

pass the test for a second time.

二、间接描写，即通过神情和肢体动作来体现人物的某种情绪。如：He slammed the door

behind him before Mon could say a word.

三、比喻句，即对人物特征进行描绘，给人深刻的印象同时渲染氛围。

四、环境描写，即通过描写环境，侧面烘托出人物的情绪，有画面定格的感觉。

尴尬羞愧的情绪表达

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ashamed/ guilty/ remorseful/ embarrassed/Shamefaced

A surge/ripple/wave/flood of embarrassment/shame rushed through/washed over/overwhelmed/crept upon sb.

Guilt/shame/embarrassment was written all over one’s face.

Be seized/consumed/enveloped/engulfed with/by shame/embarrassment.

be filled with guilt be full of remorse

Droop down/duck down/ hang down one’s head

Cup one’s face in the hands

One’s lips clamped tightly together

Sb scratched one’s head, hoping to find a hole to hide herself.

Face burned/flushed/blushed with shame.

Feel blood rushed to one’s face

Avoid/avert one’s eyes/gaze

Face reddened/turned red with shame/embarrassment

All the air seemed to disappear and she felt as if the whole world were watching her.

So ashamed was I that I desperately wanted to turn invisible and sneak out of the room.

How I wished to find a hole to hide away.

Sb was consumed with shame, twisting and rubbing his hands (扭动揉搓他的手) over and over again as if to get warm in this freezing December.

写作例句

将ABCD通过排列组合的方式，串成一个画面完整的语句。

① Embarrassment enveloping her, she could feel blood rushing to her face, wishing to find a hole to hide away.

② Hearing this, he ducked down his head, shamefaced, twisting and rubbing his hands over

and over again.

③Filled with embarrassment, she cupped her face in hands, her lips clamped tightly together, avoiding the gaze around her.

④ Her face reddening, she desperately wanted to turn invisible and sneak out of the room.

读后续写 如何描写开心+激动的情绪

四种情绪描写的方法

一、直接描写，即句中直接出现表示情绪的单词或短语。如: To his dismay, he failed to pass the

test for a second time.

二、间接描写，即通过神情和肢体动作来体现人物的某种情绪。如：He slammed the door behind

him before Mon could say a word.

三、比喻句，即对人物特征进行描绘，给人深刻的印象同时渲染氛围。

四、环境描写，即通过描写环境，侧面烘托出人物的情绪，有画面定格的感觉。

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开心、激动的情绪表达

Unable to contain/conceal one’s excitement/extreme delight, sb did sth.

A wave/surge/ripple of delight flooding over/overwhelming sb, sb did sth

Delighted/ Thrilled beyond description, sb felt on top of the world.

Such immense joy did sb feel/experience that sb did sth

Sb could feel excitement building/mounting/boiling inside him.

In an ecstasy of delight

Jump/leapt/sprang/bounced to one’s feet

Wave one’s hands wildly/ triumphantly

Quicken one’s pace/steps home spontaneously

Trot home briskly

Trot home with little hops

Crack a radiant smile

Eyes twinkle/spark/glow/glitter/dance with excitement

Face lit up/ radiate excitement

His lips curved into a bright/broad/brilliant smile/grin

grin from ear to ear

Delighted and thrilled, she trotted back home, humming and skipping like a bird in the forest

...felt like floating in the ocean of happiness

...dash out like a free bird

...feel as though having won a lottery

...feel as happy as a king/clam

Hard as she tried, her exciting voice betrayed her excitement.

With gentle breeze kissing her cheeks, she walked in the forest like a jolly elf.

The sunset cast a glow over village, the birds were tweeting merrily in the trees, and the grass were swaying happily in the wind as if sharing my joy.

Golden sunlight danced in her long hair and the children's laughter float in the air.

写作例句

将ABCD通过排列组合的方式，串成一个画面完整的语句。

①Feeling excitement building/mounting inside her, she trotted home briskly like a jolly elf.

② A surge of immense delight overwhelming her, she quicken her steps spontaneously, her

eyes glowing with excitement.

③ In an ecstacy of delight, she leapt to her feet, feeling as if having won a lottery.

④ Such immense joy did she experience that she couldn't help cracking a radiant

smile, feeling like as happy as a king.