人教版九年级英语U6-U10作文范文(含详细解说)


2023年12月21日发(作者:教育考试)

九年级U6 When was it invented?

典例1:

话题:产品设计 时态:一般现在时 人称:第一人称 体裁:说明文

Here is my design for the new app. It is named Happy English Learning. This app includes

English news, English movies, English songs, English video games and so on. It can make it

easier for students to learn together. It is true that vocabulary is very important in English

learning. Students can enlarge their English vocabulary by using this app. Their English

listening skills will greatly improve. Besides, they can also practice their spoken English by

singing English songs and watching films. In a word, students can have fun learning English

by using this app.

I think the new app should be suitable for students of different ages.

【写作逻辑】(结构仅供参考,也可三段式)

P1:首段具体介绍自己所设计app的理念及功能等。

(1) 名字是“快乐学英语”。

(2) 内容包括:英语新闻,英语电影,英语歌曲,英语游戏等。

(3) 功能:使学生一起学英语更容易;扩大词汇量;提高听力技能;通过唱英语

歌和看电影来练习口语。

(4) 总结:通过使用这款app,学生能快乐学英语。

P2:第二段表达对自己所设计app的期望。

【优秀表达】

1. design n. 设计/布局 v. 设计/构思

2. it is named…它(被)叫做 (同义替换: It is called…)

3. include v. 包含,包括

4. and so on ……等等

5. make it adj. for sb. to do sth. 使做某事对某人来说是……的

e.g. It makes it(形式宾语) easier for students to learn together. 这个app(它)使得学生们一起学习更容易。

6. It is true that………是真的 类似表达:It is said/believed that …据说……/人们相信……

7. enlarge their English vocabulary 扩大他们的英语词汇量 enlarge v. 扩大

8. in a word 简言之,总之

9. have fun doing sth. 做某事很高兴

10. be suitable for sb. 适合某人 suitable adj. 合适的,适宜的

典例2:

About two thousand years ago, there was no paper in the world. The Chinese used to

carve(雕刻) Chinese characters(汉字) on wood, stones or bamboo slips(竹片). A great inventor

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named Cai Lun tried his best to invent and improve paper. He taught people to make paper from

waste materials. In the year around 105, paper of good quality was finally invented. It can be

used for (用来做……)writing. From then on, more and more people began to write on paper.

After the invention, books became more and more popular all over the world. The invention of

paper is very important in the development of human civilization(文明). Cai Lun is a great

inventor. We should remember him forever.

九年级U7 Teenagers should be allowed to choose their own clothes.

典例1:

话题:文明校园 时态:一般现在时 人称:第一人称 体裁:说明文

Hello, boys and girls. It's reported that many schools in Shanxi are holding activities about

Behaving Yourself and Improving Your Civilization Quality. As students, what should we do?

First, we should be polite and honest, as well as respecting the teachers. And we also

should be friendly to others, and be willing to help others at the same time. Secondly, we should

obey the traffic rules when we go out. And we shouldn't litter, spit or pick flowers. Thirdly,

thanks to the policy of accurate poverty alleviation(精准扶贫), our living conditions have been

improved greatly. And we also get education support from this policy. Then, we should carry

forward Chinese traditional culture, and spread positive energy actively. We mustn't believe

rumors or say words which are harmful to our society(定语从句).

In short, wherever we are, we must be strict with ourselves in our words and behaviors.

Try to be a good student with civilization quality. Thanks a lot.

【写作逻辑】

P1: 首段简要介绍活动背景---山西省许多学校在举办“规范行为举止,提升文明素养”活动,引出下文。

P2: 第二段具体介绍作为中学生应该如何提升文明素质,规范自己的行为举止。

第一,礼貌、诚实、尊敬老师、待人友善、乐于助人。

第二,遵守交通规则,不乱扔垃圾、不随地吐痰、不采摘花朵。

第三,发扬中国传统文化,积极传播正能量。不信谣言,不发表危害社会的言论。

P3: 最后一段总结,并号召大家要严格要求自己。

【优秀表达】

1. It’s reported that … 据报道…… 同类表达:It’s said that 据说

2. behave v. 表现,表现得体 behavior=behaviour n. 行为,举止

3. quality n. 质量,品质;素质,品德 civilization quality 文明素养

4. as well as 除……以外还;和(相当于and)

5. respect v./n. 尊敬,尊重 respect the teachers 尊敬老师

6. be friendly to sb. 对某人友好

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7. be willing to do sth. 愿意/乐意做某事 be willing to help others 乐于助人

8. obey v. 服从,遵守 obey the traffic rules 遵守交通规则

9. litter v. 乱扔 n. 垃圾,废弃物

10. spit v. 吐,唾(唾沫、食物等) n. 唾沫,唾液

11. thanks to 幸亏,由于

12. accurate poverty alleviation 精准扶贫 accurate adj. 精确/准确的

poverty n. 贫穷,短缺 alleviation n. 减轻,缓解

13. living conditions 生活条件 condition n. 条件,状况

14. education support 教育扶持 support n./v. 支持,帮助

15. carry forward 发扬,继承

16. spread positive energy 传播正能量 spread n./v. 传播 positive adj. 积极乐观的

17. rumor=rumour n. 谣言,传闻

18. be harmful to 对……有害

19. in short 总之,简言之

典例2:

Recently, I had a heated (激烈的) discussion with my parents on whether teenagers should

be allowed to use smart phones at home. Here's what we think.

My parents think that teenagers should spend more time doing their homework or

reviewing what they've learned in class(宾语从句). Using smart phones at home will waste

a lot of time. Besides, students can become addicted to (入迷,上瘾) video games. However,

I don't agree with them. I think teenagers should be allowed to use smart phones at home

because it is convenient for us to contact (联系,联络) our classmates or teachers when we

have problems. What's more, there are so many learning materials (学习材料) online that can

help us learn better(定语从句).

As long as (只要) we use smart phones properly(正确地,恰当地), we can take advantage

of (利用) them.

九年级U8 It must belong to Carla.

典例1:

话题:物品归属 时态:一般现在时&一般过去时 人称:第三人称 体裁:说明文

Mike found a blue backpack on the playground. There was a magazine about basketball,

some books and a CD about classical music in it. He didn't know whose backpack it was, so he

asked some of his friends for ideas about the owner of it.

Ben said it might be Jim's, because black is his favorite color. Linda said that it could

belong to Bob, that's because he is interested in basketball and he often reads magazines about

basketball. David likes listening to classical music in his free time, so Joe thought it could be

his. At last, Mike believed it must belong to Bob, because he found Bob's name on the books.

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【写作逻辑】

P1: 首段介绍Mike捡到背包以及包里面的物品。

P2: 第二段根据每个人的猜测情况以及理由进行介绍。

1. 可能是吉姆的。理由:黑是他喜欢的颜。

2. 可能属于鲍勃。理由:他对篮球感兴趣,经常读关于篮球的杂志。

3. 可能是大卫的。理由:大卫空闲时喜欢听古典音乐。

4. 最终,麦克推断一定属于鲍勃。理由:在书上发现了鲍勃的名字。

注意:主要考察情态动词表推测的用法。

【优秀表达】

1. it might be 它可能是(不确定的推测) 拓展:it can’t be 不可能是(否定推测)

2. it could belong to 它可能属于

3. that’s because + 原因 那是因为…… 拓展:that’s why + 结果 那就是为什么……

4. in his free time 在他空闲的时候=in his spare time

5. it could be 它可能是 (可与it could belong to 替换,避免重复)

6. it must belong to 它一定属于(肯定推测)

典例2:

We had an English exam yesterday and now the papers are handed out(分发). But there is

a paper without a name on it and that student got full marks (得了满分). Who can the paper

belong to? It can't be a boy's because none of (‘三个或以上’都不,没有一个) their papers

can be so good and tidy. The paper must belong to a girl whose handwriting (书写) is very tidy.

There are only three girls who are good at handwriting---Rose, Mary and Lucy. It might belong

to Rose, but I'm not sure (我不确定) because her English is not so good. It can't be Mary's.

Although (尽管) she is a top student (优等生), she has already had hers in hand. So it must

belong to Lucy. Today she is ill at home and she does well in (擅长) English, too. Well, it must

be hers.

九年级U9 I like music that I can dance to.

典例1:

话题:最喜欢的电影 时态:一般现在时 人称:第一人称 体裁:说明文

My name is Li Hua. I like movies very much. I think a good movie can teach us about life,

or explain what the meaning of life is(宾语从句), what real friendship is and so on.

Zootopia is one of my favorite movies. It is a cartoon movie. The story is about a rabbit

that joins the police force and solves a difficult case with a fox (定语从句). I like the movie

because it teaches me to stick to my dream and then to achieve it. “If you don’t try anything

new, you’ll never succeed.” These words from the movie influenced me a lot. What’s more,

the theme song of the movie Try Everything is a great song. I like listening to it.

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This movie is really worth watching. I hope you will also enjoy it.

【写作逻辑】

P1: 首段点题,介绍自己喜欢的电影类型。

P2: 第二段具体讲述自己最喜欢的一部电影以及原因。

P3: 尾段总结一下,推荐电影,表达自己的希望。

【优秀表达】

1. like 喜欢 同义替换:be fond of; enjoy; be crazy about; be keen on …

2. explain v. 解释

3. one of +可数名词复数 / one of the +形容词最高级 +可数名词复数 (最……)之一

4. force v. 强迫 n. 武力,力量;警察部门(the force)

5. solve v. 解决 同义替换:deal with / work out

6. stick to 坚持

7. achieve v. 达到,实现 achieve one’s dream 实现某人的梦想

8. influence v./n. 影响 influence sb. a lot / have an influence on sb.

9. be worth doing 值得做

典例2:

My favorite kind of music is light music. The piece of music I like best is Going Home

written by Kenny G. You must be familiar with (对……熟悉) it. I prefer it because it is so

smooth (悦耳的,光滑的,平稳的) and beautiful. It's like the music is bringing me back to

my hometown where I grew up. When I listen to it, I feel rather (相当) relaxed, especially when

I am doing my homework. I think you should listen to it because the music is really wonderful.

Hope you will like it.

典例3:

My favorite kind of TV show is cartoon because I like TV shows which can cheer me up

(使我振奋) and relax my mind (定语从句). I prefer the cartoons that have funny stories (定语从句).

My favorite cartoon is Tom and Jerry which is about the cute mouse and the cat (定语从句). The mouse that always beats (打败) the cat (定语从句) is really cute! And the cat that

always wants to catch the mouse (定语从句) is so stupid. They fight a lot, but they really love

each other. Sometimes they protect each other and work together (合作).

I love it because it makes me laugh when I watch them. Laughing for an hour (动名词作主语) is a good way to relax. I think it is not only funny but also there is a lesson (教训)

there (not only … but also 不但……而且……). It reminds me of (提醒,使想起) the days of

childhood. After watching it, I’m filled with energy (充满活力) again. Whatever you do (无论你做什么), don't miss (错过) the cartoon. It is really worth watching.(它真的值得一看)

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九年级U10 You’re supposed to shake hands.

典例1:

话题:餐桌礼仪 时态:一般现在时 人称:第一人称 体裁:说明文

Dear Jenny,

I’m so glad you’re coming to China! Before you come, you should know about table

manners in our country. Here is some advice.

If you're invited to a dinner, there will be a lot of different dishes, not just three courses.

You may find it difficult to use chopsticks if you haven't tried before. It's a good idea to get

some practice before you come. Firstly, when the food is served, you are not supposed to start

eating first if there are older people at the table. Secondly, you shouldn’t stick your chopsticks

into your food and point at anyone with your chopsticks is impolite. Besides, don’t make any

noise when you have your soup. Lastly, you should say “thank you” after dinner.

I hope this is helpful. E-mail me if you have any other questions.

Yours,

Li Hua

【写作逻辑】

P1: 首段点题,引出主题:中国的餐桌礼仪。

P2:第二段着重说明具体建议。

总起:餐桌上有很多不同菜,不止三道。

1. 如果有长辈在饭桌上,不应该先动筷子。

2. 不应该把筷子插在饭里,用筷子指别人是不礼貌的。

3. 喝汤时不能制造任何噪音。

4. 饭后应该致谢。

P3:尾段:希望建议有用,有问题随时联系。

【优秀表达】

1. table manners 餐桌礼仪

2. course n. 一道菜

3. find it difficult to do sth. 发现做某事是困难的 find it + adj. to do sth.

4. It’s a good idea to do sth. 做某事是个好主意

5. be supposed to do 应该做…… be not supposed to do 不应该做

6. at the table 在餐桌旁

7. stick … into 把……插入……

8. point at sb. 指着某人

9. make noise 制造噪音

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典例2:

Dear Tom,

You must be excited about (对……感到兴奋) coming to China soon. Let me give you

some suggestions about Chinese customs (n. 风俗,习惯).

In China, there are indeed (adv. 确实) some table manners (餐桌礼仪). For example, you

are supposed to help lay out (摆开,布置) dishes before meals. Another example is that you

are not supposed to start eating first if there are older people at the table (表语从句). And

also, it’s impolite to stick your chopsticks into (stick … into 把……插入) the food. Besides,

you shouldn’t point at anyone with your chopsticks.

As for (至于,关于) places of interest (名胜古迹), I suggest Jinci Temple, where you can

enjoy spectacular (adj. 引人注目的,壮观的) scenery (n. 风景) and ancient Chinese buildings.

Have a good trip, and I look forward to meeting (盼望,期待) you soon!

Best wishes,

Li Ming

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