新教材人教版高中英语必修第一册Unit2 Travelling Around单词短语语法

Unit 2 Travelling Around

词语助读

①on the coast沿岸

off the coast在海面上

along the coast沿着海岸

②narrow/'nærəʊ/adj.狭窄的 vi.& vt.(使)变窄

[反义]broad adj.宽阔的

③flat/flæt/adj.平坦的；扁平的 n．公寓；单元房(英式英语)

apartment n．/ə'pɑːtmənt/公寓套房(美式英语)

④powerful/'paʊəfl/adj.强有力的；有权势的；有影响力的

power /'paʊə(r)/n.权利；力量

rich and powerful nations富强的国家

⑤emperor/'empərə(r)/n.皇帝

empire/'empaIə(r)/n.帝国

⑥now-famous adj.现在著名的 该词是由“副词＋形容词”构成的复合形容词。

⑦site/saIt/n.地点；位置；现场

⑧take control of控制；接管

⑨official/ə'fIʃl/adj.官方的；正式的；公务的

n．官员；要员

an official language官方语言

原文呈现

PERU is a country on the Pacific coast of South America with three main

areas：narrow②，dry，flat③ land running along the coast[1]，the Andes Mountains，and the Amazon rainforest.

[1]running along the coast为现在分词短语作定语，修饰land。

In the 1400s and 1500s，Peru was the centre of the powerful④ ancient Inca

Inca emperor⑤ lived in the now-famous⑥ site⑦ Machu

took control of

⑧ Peru in the 16th century and ruled until is for this reason

①

that Spanish is the main official⑨ language of Peru.[2]

[2]本句是强调句型，强调的是原因状语for this reason。

译文参考

秘鲁是一个位于太平洋海岸的南美洲国家，主要分为三个区域：海岸沿线狭窄、干燥的平原地区，安第斯山脉和亚马孙热带雨林。

在15世纪和16世纪，秘鲁是强大的古印加帝国的中心。印加皇帝住在现在著名的马丘比丘城。西班牙在16世纪时攻占秘鲁，一直统治到1821年。因此，秘鲁的主要官方语言是西班牙语。

词语助读

①flight/flaIt/n.空中航行；航班；航程

an international flight国际航班

②spend some time(in) doing sth.花时间做某事

③accommodation/ə'kɒməˌdeIʃn/n.[U]住处(常用在英式英语中)；停留处；[pl.]膳宿(常用在美式英语中)

④explore/Ik'splɔː(r)/vt.& vi.探索；考察；探讨；探究；勘探

exploration n．[C，U]勘查，探索；探究

⑤unique/ju'niːk/ adj.唯一的；独特的；特有的

be 是……特有的

⑥path/pɑːθ/n.小路；路线；道路

⑦destination/ˌdestI'neIʃn/n.目的地；终点

⑧exact/Iɡg'zækt/adj.精确的，准确的

exact size精确尺寸

⑨cut sth. to size/length把某物切割成所需的大小/长度

⑩other than除……以外

⑪fit n．匹配，相配

⑫capital(＝capital city)n.[C]首都

⑬admire/əd'maIə(r)/vt.赞赏；钦佩

⑭architecture/'ɑːkItektʃə(r)/n.建筑设计；建筑学

architect/'ɑːkItekt/n.建筑设计师

⑮/连接……和……

⑯be made of由……构成

⑰water plants水生植物

⑱centuries-old adj.上百年的，历史悠久的。该词是由“名词＋形容词”构成的复合词。

the centuries-old paper-cutting历史悠久的剪纸艺术

a centuries-old tree百年老树

⑲package/'pækIdʒ/n.包裹；包装盒

vt.将……包装好

package tour包价旅游

⑳contact/'kɒntækt/vt.联络；联系 n．联系；接触

21at常与电话号码、网址等连用。 ○文化采风

库斯科(Cusco或Cuzco)，秘鲁著名古城，古印加帝国的首都，现为库斯科省首府，位于秘鲁境内安第斯山脉的山谷中。这里气候宜人，崇山峻岭，葱郁的林木围绕在城市的四周，因而又有“安第斯山王冠上的明珠”的美称。库斯科城被称为“古印加文化的摇篮”。

马丘比丘(Machu Picchu)，秘鲁著名的印加帝国古城遗迹，位于库斯科西北方，大约建于公元15世纪。这一遗迹被认为是历史悠久的安第斯文化的集中代表。

的的喀喀湖(Lake Titicaca)，位于玻利维亚和秘鲁交界的科亚奥高原上，是南美洲第三大湖，享有“高原明珠”的美誉。湖水源于安第斯山脉的积雪融水。

原文呈现

TRAVEL PERU

Amazon Rainforest Tour

A short flight① from Cusco takes you from the Andes into the Amazon

rainforest.[1]From there，you'll spend one day travelling② by boat to your

accommodation③ in the middle of the can then spend three days

exploring④ the rainforest with a local guide and enjoying the plants and animals

unique⑤ to the rainforest.

[1]此句和第二段中的第一句都使用了“...”句型，这是旅游英语中的常用句型。

Machu Picchu Tour

This four-day walking tour will take you on amazing paths⑥ through the Andes

Mountains on the way to the city of Machu reaching your destination⑦，you will have a day to explore and be amazed by this ancient ally amazing

is the Incas' dry stone method of building.[2] Inca builders cut stones to exact⑧ sizes⑨

so that nothing was needed to hold walls together other than⑩ the perfect fit⑪ of the

stones[3]．

[2]本句是表语提前引起的全部倒装结构，句子的主语是the Incas' dry stone

method of building。

[3]此处是so that引导的结果状语从句。

Cusco Tour

Spend four days enjoying the unique Spanish and local Indian culture high in the

Andes at Cusco, the capital⑫ of the Inca Empire from the 13th until the 16th

century[4]．Stay in a local hotel，visit the museums，admire⑬ the architecture⑭，enjoy the excellent local food，and go shopping at the local markets.

[4]“until the 16th century”作Cusco的同位语。

Lake Titicaca Tour

Enjoy the beautiful countryside as you spend a day driving along the new

highway connecting Cusco to⑮ Lake Titicaca[5]．There，a boat will take you to stay

with a local Uros family on an island for three the island and the Uros

homes are made of⑯ water plants⑰ from the lake.

So come and experience what Peru has to offer：everything from the ancient Inca

culture and centuries-old⑱ Spanish villages to deep rainforests, high mountains，and

a beautiful coastline.

For more brochures about other package⑲ tours around Peru, contact⑳ us

1 tourinfo@. at2○[5]此处是as引导的时间状语从句。

译文参考

游历秘鲁

亚马孙热带雨林之旅

从库斯科乘坐短途飞机，便能从安第斯山脉抵达亚马孙热带雨林。从那里，您将花一天的时间乘船到您在森林中的住处。在接下来的三天里，您可以在当地导游的陪同下，深入雨林进行探索，欣赏雨林特有的动植物。

马丘比丘之旅

历时四天的步行旅程将带您踏上令人惊叹的、穿越安第斯山脉、通往马丘比丘城的小道。抵达目的地后，您将有一天的时间探索古城，欣赏其令人惊叹的景。特别令人惊叹的是印加人的干式石头搭砌的建造方法。印加的建筑工人将石头切割成精确的尺寸，仅仅凭着石头间的完美契合，即可稳固墙体。

库斯科之旅

花上四天时间，在位于安第斯山脉高地的库斯科——13至16世纪时的印加帝国首都——体验独特的西班牙和当地印第安人文化。您可就住于当地酒店，探访博物馆，欣赏建筑，品味地方美食，再去当地市场购物。

的的喀喀湖之旅

当你花一天时间驱车在连接库斯科和的的喀喀湖的高速公路上时，可以欣赏美丽的乡村风景。从湖畔乘船，去岛上的当地乌鲁斯人家里住上三天。岛屿和乌鲁斯人的家都是用湖里的水生植物搭建而成的。

因此，一定要来秘鲁，感受当地的风情：秘鲁不但拥有古老的印加文化，存续时间长达数百年的西班牙村庄，也有深邃的雨林、高耸的山脉和美丽的海岸线。

想要获得更多秘鲁跟团游的手册，敬请通过tourinfo@。

1．amaze vt.(使)惊奇；惊喜→amazed adj.惊奇的；惊喜的→amazing adj.令人惊奇的；令人惊喜的

2．arrange v．安排；筹备→arrangement n．安排；筹备

3．extreme adj.极度的；异乎寻常的→extremely adv.极其；非常

4．fly v．飞，飞行→flight n．空中航行；航班；航程

5．economy n．经济；节约→economic adj.经济(上)的；经济学的

6．official adj.官方的；正式的；公务的 n．官员；要员→officially adv.官方地；正式地；公务地→office n．办公室；政府机关；官职

7．admire vt.钦佩；赞赏→admirable adj.令人钦佩/羡慕的→admiration n．钦佩；赞赏

8．architect n．建筑设计师→architecture n．建筑设计；建筑学

1．rent vt.租用；出租 vi.租用；租金为 n．租金

①The four of us rented a flat together to save our house-paying.租用

②The landlord has put up the rent by $20 a month.租金

③My dad has a cottage which he rents out to tourists.出租

2．source n．来源；出处；原因；根源；发源地 v．出……的来源，(从……)获得

①They get their money from various sources.来源

②Let's walk along the stream to find out its source.发源地

③We source all the meat sold in our stores from British farms.获得

3．make up构成；形成；虚构，编造；和解，言归于好；补足，凑足；化妆，打扮

①Girls make up 63% of the student numbers.构成

②The teacher made up an interesting story for the children.编造，虚构

③We managed to make up for the lost time.补足

④They made him up as an old man for the last act of the play.化妆，打扮

⑤They quarrelled with each other but soon made up.和解

Words and Phrases

知识要点1 apply vi.& vt. 申请；请求 vt.应用；涂(油漆、乳剂)

(教材P24)apply for a visa 申请签证

[例1] We should apply new words to spoken and written English.

我们应该把新单词应用到英语口语和写作中去。

[例2] Jack has applied to join the Chinese nationality.

杰克已申请加入中国国籍。

[知识拓展]

(1)apply to do sth.

apply(to sb.)for sth.

apply to

apply sth.

apply oneself to

(2)application n.

(3)applicant n.

知识要点2 pack vi.&vt.收拾(行李)

vt.包装

n．(商品的)纸包；纸袋；大包

(教材P24)pack some clothes

收拾一些衣服

[例1] He went to a shop to buy a pack of cigarettes.

他去商店买了一包香烟。

[例2] The bus was packed with passengers.

公共汽车里挤满了乘客。

[知识拓展]

a pack of

pack up

be

一包……；一……；一套……

收拾行李；收拾好

挤满/装满……

申请做某事；要求做某事

(向某人)申请某物

适用于

把某物应用/涂抹于……

致力于/集中精力于……

申请(书)；应用

申请人

知识要点3 amazing adj.令人惊奇的；令人惊喜的

(教材P25)Why famous：amazing waterfalls，colourful lakes，beautiful mountains

出名原因：令人惊奇的瀑布，五彩缤纷的湖泊，美丽的山脉

[例1] It is amazing that the child can speak five foreign languages.

这个孩子会说五种外语，真是令人惊叹。

[例2] The most amazing thing about nature is its variety.

大自然最令人惊叹的是它的多样性。

[知识拓展]

(1)amaze vt.

(2)amazed adj.

be amazed

be amazed to do sth.

(3)amazement n.

to one's amazement

in amazement

知识要点4 take control of控制；接管

使惊讶

惊奇的；惊喜的

对……很吃惊

对做某事感到吃惊

惊奇

令某人吃惊的是

惊讶地；吃惊地

(教材P26)Spain took control of Peru in the 16th century and ruled until 1821.

西班牙在16世纪时攻占秘鲁，一直统治到1821年。

[例1] I learned how to take control of it.

我学会了如何控制它。

[例2] By setting goals you are taking control of your life.

通过设定目标，你可以掌控你的生活。

[知识拓展]

(1)gain/take/get control of

get/under control

lose control of

(2)under control

out of/beyond control

in control(of sth.)

in/under the

取得对……的控制权，控制……

控制住……

失去对……的控制权

被控制住

失控，无法控制

控制(某物)

在……的控制之下

知识要点5 recognise vt.辨别出；承认；认可

(教材P26)Recognise text type

辨别文体类别

[例1] Our monitor's service to our class has been recognised.

我们班长为班级所作的贡献得到了大家的认可。

[例2] The film star wears sunglasses. Therefore, he can go shopping without

being recognised.

这位影星戴着太阳镜。这样他就可以去购物而不被认出来了。

[知识拓展]

(1)be recognised to

It is

(2)recognition n.

beyond (all) recognition

(3)表示“认为，

①as/

②as/

③as...

知识要点6 accommodation n．住处；停留处；膳宿

(教材P26)From there，you'll spend one day travelling by boat to your

accommodation in the middle of the forest.

从那里，您将花一天的时间乘船到您在森林中的住处。

[例1] The Olympic Village was built for athletes' accommodations.

奥运村是为了给运动员们提供住宿而建的。

[例2] He accompanied us to the place of interest and provided

accommodations for us.

他陪我们去了那个旅游景点，还给我们安排了膳宿。

[知识拓展]

(1)make/provide accommodations for 为……提供膳宿

被认为是……

人们公认……

认出；认识

认不出来

把……看作……”的词组还有：

(2)accommodate vt.& vi. 容纳；提供住宿；使适应；调和，使和解

accommodate

知识要点7 admire vt.钦佩；赞赏

(教材P27)Stay in a local hotel，visit the museums，admire the architecture，enjoy

the excellent local food，and go shopping at the local markets.

您可就住于当地酒店，探访博物馆，欣赏建筑，品味地方美食，再去当地市场购物。

[例1] I admire her for her way of solving problems.

我很欣赏她解决问题的方式。

使某人自己适应……

向……提供……

[例2] Many people around the world admire China for its great contributions

to the world peace.

世界各地的许多人钦佩中国对世界和平所做的巨大贡献。

[知识拓展]

(1)admire (doing)sth.

(2)admiration n.

express admiration for sb./sth.

(3)admiring adj.

admirable adj.

admirer n.

知识要点8 contact vt.联络；联系

n．联系；接触

(教材P27)For more brochures about other package tours around Peru，contact us

at tourinfo@.

想要获得更多秘鲁跟团游的手册，敬请通过tourinfo@。

[例1] Have you kept in contact with your classmates after graduation?

你毕业后和同学们还保持联系吗？

[例2] We forgot to exchange numbers — now we can't contact each other.

我们忘记交换电话号码了。现在我们联系不到对方。

[知识拓展]

(1)make contact with＝get in/into contact with 与……取得联系

lose contact with

keep in contact with

(2)be in/out of contact with

与……失去联系

与……保持联系

与……有/没有联系

因(做)某事羡慕某人

钦佩；赞美；羡慕

(表示)羡慕/钦佩某人/物

赞赏的；羡慕的

令人钦佩的；值得赞美的

崇拜者；追求者

知识要点9 request n．& vt.(正式或礼貌的)要求；请求

(教材P29)Special requests 特殊要求

[例1] Our teacher made a request that we (should)be well prepared for the

exam.

我们的老师要求我们对考试做好充分的准备。

[例2] It is requested that all the members (should) be present at the meeting

tomorrow.

要求所有的成员都参加明天的会议。

[知识拓展]

(1)make a request for sth./

at one's request

(2)request do sth.

(should)do sth.

It is (should) do sth.

request sth. (from sb.)

[名师点津]

动词request后的宾语从句以及名词request后的表语从句、同位语从句都要用虚拟语气，即谓语动词为(should＋)动词原形。

知识要点10 view n．视野；景；看法

vt.观看；注视；考虑

(教材P29)a view 一个视野；一片风景

[例1] You can have a good view of the beautiful sunrise from the top of the

hill.

从山顶上你可以清楚地看到美丽的日出。

[例2] I view him as my best friend.

我把他看作我最好的朋友。

[知识拓展]

(1)come into view

in view of

in one's view/opinion＝as far as concerned(as...

进入视野；看得见

由于；鉴于；考虑到

在某人看来；依某人的看法

把……看作……

请求；要求……

应某人的要求

请求某人做某事

请求……

据要求……

请求，要求

知识要点11 sight n．景象；视野；视力

(教材P30)I've heard that it is an amazing sight，and I can't wait to go.

我听说它是一个令人惊奇的景象，我迫不急待地想去(看看)。

[例1] They finally lost sight of land.

他们终于看不见陆地了。

[例2] At first sight，it looks like a dog，but it is a stone.

乍一看，好像是只狗，但它是一块石头。

[知识拓展]

(1)catch/lose sight of

in/within sight

out of sight

(2)at first sight

知识要点12 comment n．议论；评论

vi.&vt.发表意见；评论

(教材P31)Revise your draft according to your partner's comments.

根据搭档的评论修订你的草稿。

[例1] I don't think I can comment on/upon their decision.

我觉得我无法对他们的决定作出评论。

[例2] It is impolite to make comments on others' looks.

评论他人的外表是不礼貌的。

[知识拓展]

(1)comment on/upon 对……作出评论

看见/看不见……

在视野范围内，看见

不在视野范围内，看不见

乍一看；初看时

(2)make a comment/comments on/upon 对……作出评论

no comment

Sentence Patterns

重点句式1 强调句型

(教材P26)It_is for this reason that_Spanish is the main official language of

Peru.

因此，秘鲁的主要官方语言是西班牙语。

[句式分析]

本句中是一个强调句型，此句强调了原因状语for this reason。

[例1] It is in the hall that they have had a meeting.

无可奉告

他们是在礼堂举行的会议。

[例2] It was last summer that I graduated from the university.

我是去年夏天从那所大学毕业的。

[知识拓展]

强调句型的常用形式：

(1)陈述句形式：It is/was＋被强调成分＋that/who＋其他成分．

(2)一般疑问句形式：Is/Was it＋被强调成分＋that/who＋其他成分？

(3)特殊疑问句形式：特殊疑问词＋is/was it that＋其他成分？

(4)not until的强调句式：It is/was hat＋其他成分．

[名师点津]

“”强调句型的注意事项：

(1)不用于强调谓语动词；

(2)强调主语且指人时that可换成who；

(3)去掉“It's”“that/who”后句子结构仍完整。

重点句式2 as作连词

(教材P27)Enjoy the beautiful countryside as you spend a day driving along

the new highway connecting Cusco to Lake Titicaca.

当你花一天时间驱车在连接库斯科和的的喀喀湖的高速公路上时，可以欣赏美丽的乡村风景。

[句式分析]

as引导时间状语从句，相当于when和while。

[例1] As she grew older she gained in confidence.

随着年龄的增长她的信心也增强了。

[例2] We all cheered as we watched the national flag rising in the Olympic

Games on TV.

在电视上看到国旗在奥运会会场上升起的时候，我们都欢呼起来。

[例3] As time went by，I gradually adapted myself to the school life.

随着时间的推移，我逐渐适应了学校生活。

[知识拓展]

as引导的从句类型：

(1)引导方式状语从句，意为“按照，如同”。

(2)引导时间状语从句，意为“当……时候；一边……一边……；随着”。

(3)引导原因状语从句，意为“因为；既然”。

(4)引导让步状语从句，意为“尽管”。必须用倒装。

[名师点津]

as是连词，意为“随着”，引导时间状语从句；with是介词，意为“随着”，后接名词或代词等构成with短语或with复合结构。例句③可以改为：

With time going by，I gradually adapted myself to the school life.

重点句式3 It＋be＋adj.＋that从句

(教材P30)It's_amazing_that there are more than 8,000 statues，and no one in

modern times knew about them until the 1970s.

令人惊奇的是有8 000多座雕像，而且直到二十世纪七十年代现代的人才知道它们。

[句式分析]

(1)It＋be＋形容词(obvious，true，possible，strange，)＋that从句

(2)在句型“It is/was strange/natural/important/＋that从句”中，从句常用虚拟语气，即从句谓语动词为“should＋动词原形”，should可以省略。

[例1] It is obvious that there would be no new school today without their

help.

很明显，如果没有他们的帮助就不会有今天的新学校。

[例2] It is true that he was admitted by Peking University.

他被北京大学录取了，这是真的。

1．You can then spend three days exploring the rainforest with a local guide and

enjoying the plants and animals unique to the rainforest.

[分析] 本句是一个简单句，主干使用了“”结构，exploring与enjoying是并列的分词结构。unique to the rainforest是形容词短语作定语，修饰

the_plants_and_animals。

[译文] 在接下来的三天里，您可以在当地导游的陪同下，深入雨林进行探索，欣赏雨林特有的动植物。

2．Especially amazing is the Incas' dry stone method of building.

[分析] 本句是一个倒装结构，因语篇衔接和语义需要而使用，表语especially_amazing前置是为了突出和强调。正常语序的句子为“The_Incas'_dry_stone_method_of_building_is_especially_amazing.”。

[译文] 特别令人惊叹的是印加人的干式石头搭砌的建造方法。

现在进行时表示将来

现在进行时除了表示“①正在进行的动作；②现阶段正在发生的动作，但说话时不一定正在进行”之外，还可以表示根据计划或安排在最近要进行或发生的事情。即现在进行时表示将来。

[观察例句]

1．I'm planning to travel to Jiuzhai Valley.

2．I'm looking forward to seeing the colourful lakes，

3．How are you getting ready for your trip?

4．What are you doing this weekend?

5．We're meeting at 10：00 a．m. at the bus stop near our school.

6．Are you eating there at the water park?

[归纳用法]

一、现在进行时表示计划安排好要采取的行动或要做的事情

What are you doing for the National Day holiday?

你国庆假期打算做什么？

Sam is taking advanced literature next term.

萨姆下学期要选修高级文学。

We are spending the Spring Festival in parents have booked the air

tickets.

我们打算在三亚过春节。我爸爸妈妈已经订好机票了。

[名师点津]

①在使用现在进行时表示将来的句子中，除非上下文意思清楚，通常都需要时间状语。

Are you meeting your coach this weekend?

这个周末你要和教练见面吗？

We are having a few guests over tomorrow.

明天有几位客人要来。

②能用进行时表示将来的多是一些瞬间动词，即终止性动词，如come，go，stay，arrive，leave，begin，start等。

I'm coming.我马上来。

They are getting married next month.

他们下个月结婚。

③现在进行时表示将来除使用位移动词外，也可使用某些非位移动词，如do，buy，meet，have，play，finish，stay，publish等，此时句中一般要有表示将来的时间状语。

The young man is meeting his girlfriend this afternoon.

这个年轻人今天下午要去见他的女朋友。

I am publishing a book this year.

我打算今年出版一本书。

二、表示将来意义的其他方式

1．will/shall do表示单纯的将来，是对未来事情发生的“预见性”。可用于说话时才想到或决定的事。

—Where is the telephone book?

——电话号码簿在哪里？

—I'll go and get it for you.

——我去给你拿。

I shall go to the seaside for a short holiday tomorrow.

明天我将去海边度个短假。

2．be going to do表示现在的打算、意图；也可表示预料在最近将会发生的事。

Are you going to watch the football game this afternoon?

你打算今天下午去看足球赛吗？

Look at the dark clouds！It's going to rain.

看这些乌云！天要下雨了。

3．be＋to do表示预定、按计划或安排将会发生，也可表示将来必定发生或表示命令等。

The meeting is to take place next Monday.

会议定于下星期一举行。

4．be about to do意为“刚要；正要”。

The concert is about to begin.音乐会即将开始。

5．一般现在时表示将来

(1)多指按时刻表或规定要发生的动作或事件；多为表示“出发，到达”等的动词，如arrive，leave，start，go out，take off等。

The flight to Shanghai takes off at 3：00 p．m.

去上海的航班下午3点起飞。

(2)用于条件、时间及让步状语从句中。

It will be five years before the project is completed.

五年后这项工程才能完成。

I'll go camping if it is fine tomorrow.

如果明天天气好，我就去野营。

[名师点津]

will也会“临时起意”

表示事先未经过考虑的打算、计划，是在说话时才想到或决定的事，即临时起意，这时通常用will。

旅行计划

本单元的写作项目属于说明文类别中的“说明旅行计划类”的书信，这种题目要求我们针对旅行的地点、时间和出行方式等进行准确的描述，学生应该注意描述的重点和顺序。在写作过程中力争做到：紧扣主题；句子结构完整；信息内容准确；篇章结构连贯。

[基本框架]

(一)Para.1.——突出重点，开门见山，直接描述旅行的主要目的。

(二)Para.2.——介绍旅行中的其他计划和安排。

(三)Para.3.——交代出行方式及原因。

(四)Para.4.——总结此次旅行的心得体会。

[常用词块]

1．take advantage of利用

2．make a reservation预订

3．take a tour游览

4．set out/off出发

5．leave for动身去某地

6．enjoy the scenery欣赏风景

7．a seven-day trip七日游

8．broaden one's horizons开阔眼界

9．around the corner即将来临

10．experience a different culture体验不同的文化

[常用语句]

★精彩开头

1．I'm writing to share my travel with you.

2．Over the holiday，my parents and I are planning

3．I'm writing to tell you my travel

4．You have asked for some information about/concerning my

5．We are planning to make a

★正文佳句

1．We are looking

2．We are anxious

3．It is an amazing sight that I have ever seen.

4．We can't

5．I have

6．There is no

7．We'll go to the destination by train/

★余味结尾

1．I think that's all for now.

2． really worth your g forward to your coming.

3．I'll never forget

4．I'll travel here again if I have time in the future.

5．I hope you will have a trip

6．In a word，the travel

假定你是李华，受你的邀请，你的英国笔友Tony在即将来临的暑假要来你所在城市大连游玩，请你根据下列提示信息拟一份旅游计划，以便朋友到来时做到各方面有条不紊。

1．去机场接机；

2．游玩大连市区；

3．去海滩看海，等等。

要求：1.可以适当添加信息，以使行文连贯；

2．词数80左右。

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【学生习作】

Travelling to Dalian

①[点评] 1.①②句可合为②Summer holiday is coming. I have a good

一句。

2.③句可改为含非谓语动词的句子。

3.④⑤句可省略主语合为一句话。

plan for it. My best friend Tony who is from Britain

will spend the holiday with me. Tony is 17 years old

and he likes China very much. One week ago，I

wrote him a letter and invited him to come to

Dalian for the my joy，Tony has

③

accepted my invitation and will fly to Dalian next

week. I will go to the airport to pick him up.④Then

I'll show him around the city.⑤We'll go to the beach

to watch the sea last, we'll visit some

interesting places. Tony will live in my house during

the holiday. I hope we'll have a good time.

【升格作文】

Summer holiday is coming and I have a good plan for best friend Tony

who is from Britain will spend the holiday with is 17 years old and he likes

China very week ago，I wrote him a letter inviting him to come to Dalian

for the my joy，Tony has accepted my invitation and will fly to Dalian next

week.I will go to the airport to pick him I'll show him around the city and go

to the beach to watch the sea.

At last，we'll visit some interesting will live in my house during the

holiday.I hope we'll have a good time.