instructions;建议你在30分钟内,根据下面所给的题目和提纲用英语写出一

instructions;建议你在30分钟内,根据下面所给的题目和提纲用英语写出一篇不少于80

Instructions:建议你在30分钟内,根据下面所给的题目和提纲用英语写出一篇不少于80词的短文.

My Last New Year

1.欢度新年的地点

2.欢度新年的过程

答案

注释

这是一篇记叙文.根据提纲要求,应该先陈述在哪里欢度新年；然后叙述欢度新年的全过程或者主要过程,因为是新年,其内容应该尽可能的有特,可以是与自然界相联系的,如滑雪、堆雪人等,也可以是人文关怀方面的,比如参加一些传统的活动,或者是现代的新时尚等.因为这是记叙过去发生的事情,时态应该使用过去时.参考范文中的“not…until…”的意思是“直到……才”.

范文

I spent my last new year in the countryside with my

snow began to fall soon after I arrived.I was very excited since it didn’t

snow quite often in that area.I invited some friends to an open

,we took many beautiful pictures together on the snow; then

we made a big snow man and fought with snow people in the

village also came out to enjoy the pretty scenery and some of them

joined did not go home until it was dark.(92 words)