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It is better for children to grow up in the

countryside than in a big city. Do you agree

or disagree？

Do you agree or disagree?

Model Answer 1:

Some people believe that it is better for children

to grow up in the countryside than in a big city.

However, other people think that a big city gives

more opportunities and it is good for the long run.

Personally, for several reasons I think that it is

better for children to grow up in a city that offers

numerous advantages. First of all, it is very

important for a child to grow up in a healthy

environment. Children need fresh air, not

polluted by the huge amount of cars and

factories of the modern city. In the country, they

can spend more time exercising and walking

with their friends. Scientists say that now

children spend the same amount of time

watching TV as they do at school. Probably, the

possibility to join their friends for a play will

change this proportion. Another important

aspect of this is that parents will have more time

to spend with their children as a result of

eliminating traffic jams and decreasing driving

time as a whole. From the other side, children

have some advantages living in a big city. For

example, they have more opportunities to

choose from what they want to do. They can

choose to attend ballet school, school of art,

gymnastics, etc. For the long run, it is good for

them. They will be better prepared for a life in a

"real world" and they will have more chances to

make a good career and succeed. Moreover, a

big city usually has many entertaining centres

with movie theatres and play stations. When I

was a child I liked to go to the movie theatre with

my parents to watch a premiere. One more

reason to choose a big city for a child is that a

city provides better live conditions and services

such as medical, dental, etc. My friend lived in

the country for a while and one time he and his

family had to drive a couple of hours to the

nearest medical centre when his child got a

heavy cough. To summarise, I agree with those

people who want to raise their children in a city.

The plenty of opportunities offered by a city

helps children to find what they really like and be

the best at it. Moreover, despite the air pollution,

children get a better medical service that is good

for their health.

Model Answer 2:

Bringing up young generation in a big city is not

as good as the countryside. I partially disagree

with this statement. In my view, cities are the

best place to grow up children and to live.

However, cities have some drawbacks which will

be discussed in this essay. Many people opt to

live in large cities rather than the countryside

because they prefer to live in the metropolitan

area than remote areas. Such a good benefit is

an employment. People, who are living in a city

can easily get a job in different types of

professions. Another reason is the easy

availability of transportation services, large

complex network maps of buses and trains

covering almost all surrounding suburbs of a city,

which can save a lot of valuable time spent by

travelling with the own vehicle, which is more

convenient and economical when your children

go to school. And you will know where they are.

However, the cost of living in a city is usually

much higher than in the countryside. Inhabitants

of cities have to pay higher prices for housing,

transport, and even food. Moreover, the big

cities have some social problems such as high

crime and poverty rates in comparison with the

countryside. Furthermore, the air quality in cities

is often poor, due to pollution from traffic, and

the streets and public transport systems are

usually overcrowded. As a result, city life can be

unhealthy and stressful to our children. After

analysing the essay, we can conclude that those

points are the important factors when

considering living either in the urban or rural

area. Apart from those, entertainment facilities,

well-developed infrastructure and living with

latest trends are other reasons for living in cities.

Model Answer 3:

Today children predominantly live in villages

and in the countryside, but many others live in

big cities. This can be seen in terms of their

family, hobbies, interests, and undoubtedly,

lifestyle. It is believed that rural children are

more skilled than children who live in big cities.

This will be proven by analysing of children's

lifestyle in both countryside and big city in this

essay. Firstly, it is well-known fact that living in

isolated villages can improve children's health,

and therefore, their physical development. For

instance, if children constantly do house-working

and gardening, they will be healthy. This

example clearly shows that working hard

improves not only health but also diversifies

lifestyle. From this, it can be concluded that

living in villages accelerates physical developing

and improves skills which they need in future life.

Secondly, there is no doubt to say that rural

children can adapt and develop in big cities,

which are saturated by a variety of places. For

example, they can visit and feel a sense of

ethnic places, restaurants, stadiums, despite

adapting. It is obvious when looking at the

example that rural children slowly adapt for

boiling city lifestyle. Thus, it would be better to

live near big cities. After analysing the areas of

both lifestyles, it can be concluded that rural

children are healthier than children of big cities.

As has been shown, skills of rural children

based on house-working, albeit village is not an

ideal place to develop life skills. It is predicted

that children will live in villages in the future.

Model Answer 4:

At the present time, people say that children

should be grown in the countryside rather than

in the big city. I totally disagree with this rubric,

because in big cities the quality of education and

medicine are better compared with rural areas

and huge occupation choice makes the city

more convenient place in nourish of the child.

Firstly, children should be educated by qualified

teachers but the countryside can't create that

kind of condition for education and a large

number of their teachers didn't even end up the

university education. Good education is the

earnest of success in the future. But not only a

bright future depends on the education of the

children, it also depends on proper medical

treatment and facilities of medicine. Aforesaid

medicine, one of the main necessary things in

raising children. Without vaccination, young

children might get ill or even die from fatal

diseases. To prevent this, in cities almost every

month child is gone through medicine check and

necessary injections are done to him. In addition

to this, currently the development of big cities

strongly differs from the development of rural

areas and it's another reason to grow children in

big cities. Better conditions for children in job

selection, they can choose every career they

want, for example, to be a pilot, they can realise

their dream in the city, but in a lot of

countrysides, the airports don't exist. In

conclusion, a countryside is not the best place to

raise children and big cities either. But, in my

view nourishment of children should take place

in the city due to high education and medicine

level and the big choice in job selection.

Model Answer 5:

City life has improved significantly with the

advancement of technology and it provides state

of the art facilities and services to its residents.

Some people argue that children are more

receptive to new learning experiences that could

only be practice in cities. Children can enjoy a

high standard of education, modern libraries,

parks and many others technological services

while spending their lives in cities. However,

others claim that countryside is environmentally

friendly and provides great physical activities

that are mandatory for children health. I strongly

believe that life in the city has undeniable

positive effects on children. Education plays a

pivotal role in children life. Educational

institutions in cities are equipped with modern

teaching methods and facilities and have more

qualified and trained professionals that help

students substantially to improve their

knowledge and information about the subject.

Furthermore, the internet and mobile phone has

become an essential constituent of children daily

life and are more prevalent in cities. New

technological advancement also helps children

to achieve better grades by researching on the

internet and by other positive use of these

technologies. However, it is often seen that

children in villages are healthier and less

susceptible to illness. Some of the reasons are

clean environment and absence of pollution in

their area and vicinity. In addition to this, they

are more interested in physical games and take

parts in activities that demand hard work and

strength thus help them to remain active and fit.

To sum up, I would like to say that children

grown up in cities are more dynamic and

intellectual due to finest facilities they had. This

also helps them in achieving more success in

long run.