12月英语四级作文

12月英语四级作文

2015年12月英语四级作文范文汇总

Directions: Write a composition entitled Ideals. You should

write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in

Chinese:

1. 人人都有理想;

2. 实现理想的因素是什么;

3. 你的理想及实现的途径。

【经典范文】

Ideals

Everyone has his ideals. A businessman wishes to make

greater profit; a farmer expects plumper harvests; a student tries

to learn more and better. And

However, one should be sensible about whether his ideal is

well founded or not. If it is, one has to plan and work hard for its

realization. Effort, skill and persistence are all necessary. And very

often, one has to get help from others, including advice and

support in one form or another.

My ideal is to become a doctor. It is said that the field of

medicine is a well-paid profession, but I take it as a lofty

profession entrusted with saving people’s lives. To realize my

ideal I have concentrated on laboratory work to develop the

analytical skills necessary to become a qualified doctor. Ijm

sure^willjiealizejm^jidealjifrperseverejinjthisjpursuit. (156 words)

【译文赏析】 理想

人人都有理想。商人的理想是赚取更大的利润;农民希望获得更大

的丰收;学生则争取学得更多、更好。每个人都为实现理想多多少少付

出了努力。

然而，人们应该想想自己的理想是否建立在扎实的基础上。如果

是， 那么人们就必须为实现理想而做出计划、辛勤工作。努力、技巧和恒心 都是必备要素。人们还常常需要从别人身上获得帮助，包括各种形式的 建议和支持。

我的理想是成为一名医生。医师是一个薪水不错的.职业，而我则视 之为一个治病救人的高尚职业。为了实现我的理想，我必须集中精力于 实验室的工作，从而培养作为一名合格医师所必备的分析技巧。若能持 之以恒，我相信我能实现自己的理想。

【词汇表达亮点】

strive v.努力，奋斗

with more or less effort 用或多或少的努力

realize v. 实现

be sensible about.意识到

persistence n.坚持

it is said that.据说

well-paid adj.收入高的，待遇优厚的

lofty adj.高尚的

委托给某人

concentrate on. 集中注意力于

analytical adj.分析的

qualified adj.合格的

persevere in 坚持

pursuit n.追求;职业

下面对四级作文的真题命题规律进行解析的同时，逐一进行了解析并提供了参考范文，供广大考生参考。

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write

an essay based on the picture below. You should start you essay

with a brief description of the picture and then comment on the

kid’s understanding of going to school. You should write at least

120 words but no more than 150 words。

手机与上学

命题解析

本题要求首先简要描述图画，然后评论这个孩子对上学的理解。图画显示：一个小孩问母亲：如果我的手机已经知道一切，为什么我还要上学呢?显而易见，本题主旨为手机是否可以取代上学。

国内写作考试中已经反复考察手机这一热点话题。2009年MBA[微博]写作考察“手机短信”，2010年考研[微博]英语(二)写作考察“手机入网”，2013年12月四级写作考察“手机在人们生活中越来越多的使用”，也考查了“网络对学习的影响，以及教育是否仅仅是获得信息”。2014年12月，考研英语(一)写作再次考察“手机时代的‘聚会’”。如果考生研究过之前的写作真题，诸多表达均可使用。本题尤其和13年12月四级写作考察的“网络对学习的影响”异曲同工，几乎就是原题重考。

写作思路：

1、本题首段应简要描述图画，指出当代有些年轻人认为手机可以取代上学。

2、次段最好进行正反论证，说明手机虽然可以帮助获得大量信息，但无法取代教育，教育绝非仅仅是获取信息。

3、第三段最好提出建议措施：我们应该合理使用手机，同时学校教育必不可少、不可或缺。

参考范文：

It is subtly revealed in the portrayal that a young boy is

talking with his mother in their house. The boy asks confusingly,

“Why am I going to school if my phone already knows

everything?”

We often hear of successful people who are largely “self-taught”. I say largely because, in all cases, they have received

some formal teaching, whether it was from a teacher in a

classroom, or from parents or a relative at home. In my case, I am

glad I always learned from teachers, from fist grade all the way

through my Master’s degree. A good teacher adds considerably

to the materials contained in the textbooks。

In conclusion, it takes a great deal of self-discipline to learn

a subject via mobile phones with only self-study, having no

guidance or instruction from a teacher. A skilled and talented

teacher can add so much richness to what is being learned. I

believe it is always better to have a teacher to some degree。

如图所示，一个小孩正在家中和他的母亲谈话。这个男孩疑惑地问：“如果我的手机已经知道一切了，我为什么还要去上学呢?”

我们常听人说某某成功人士多半靠“自学”成才。 之所以说“多半”是因为所有的成功人士都曾接受过正规教育，有的是在教室里听老师讲课，有的是在家里由父母或亲属给上课。拿我来说，我很庆幸从大一一直到硕士研究生毕业我都在跟着老师学。一位好的老师可以教给你许多课本材料以外的东西。

总之，在没有老师指点的情况下，通过手机自学一门学科需要严格的自律。而一位经验丰富且有才华的教师能教给你许多书本知识以外的东西。所以我想，在某种程度上，有老师教总归更好。